Poor Victim Selection 1/?
anonymous
July 24 2014, 03:55:32 UTC
Garrus Vakarian's woke up to a headache that would stagger a Krogan and a pair of aching wrists. As his eyes slowly came back into focus, it began to dawn on him that the reason his wrists were aching was that he was hanging from them, chained to a wall in what looked like a pretty low-rent part of Omega. Huh. Either he and Jane had both gotten very, very drunk last night or
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And I think choosing Garrus was an even better choice than Shepard would have been. You wrote him really well (I can totally imagine Garrus saying that) and he seems like he would react like this. John seems more like he'd go ballistic.
Poor Victim Selection 2/?
anonymous
July 28 2014, 02:36:50 UTC
"Let me make sure I have this straight." Commander Jane Shepard gave the scruffy-looking human smirking at her from across the dimly lit warehouse room a glare. "You've got a grudge against a Spectre."
"I do. And her sidekicks. Can't forget them." The man grinned, and the semi-circle of gangsters behind him laughed, leering.
"Excuse me." Admiral Tali'Zorah vas Normandy looked up from the chair she was tied to, about five feet to the right of Shepard's. "Crewmembers, thank you very much. I'm nobody's sidekick."
"Associates," Liara T'soni chimed in from her chair, next over from Tali's.
"Fellow soldiers," offered Ashley Williams from the last chair in line.
Shepard silenced her crew with a quick glare. "Whatever you want to call them. Us. I'm going to assume you didn't sleep through the Reaper War."
"Or get hit on the head and lose your memories of it." Shepard glanced over at Liara. "What? Blows to the head frequently give humans amnesia. I saw it on Star-Crossed." Some of the smarter gangsters arrayed against
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Poor Victim Selection 3/4
anonymous
July 28 2014, 03:22:50 UTC
Before the thug could react Jane threw her weight back in the chair, falling onto her back and using the momentum to throw her would-be rapist across the room. The air left his lungs with a whoop as he landed on the steel-plated floor behind her, and Jane rolled to the side fractions of a second before the first shots rang out from the other gangsters. The first volley went wide, but as Jane craned her neck to look up she could see the muzzles turning to follow her movement
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Poor Victim Selection 4/4
anonymous
July 28 2014, 03:32:55 UTC
"Guys?" A young male voice came from the corridor outside the warehouse. "Guys, what's going on?" A young male human skidded into the room and stopped, taking in the scene in front of him. Liara glowing with power, Tali with her omnitool ready, Ashley bringing her knife back up into a fighting stance. And in front of them Jane Shepard, her pistol shifting to track him as though it was an extension of her arm. Before any of them could move, the boy's pistol fell out of his nerveless hands and down to the deck. "Uh. I-I surrender
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And I think choosing Garrus was an even better choice than Shepard would have been. You wrote him really well (I can totally imagine Garrus saying that) and he seems like he would react like this. John seems more like he'd go ballistic.
So... thanks and I hope you can write more.
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"I do. And her sidekicks. Can't forget them." The man grinned, and the semi-circle of gangsters behind him laughed, leering.
"Excuse me." Admiral Tali'Zorah vas Normandy looked up from the chair she was tied to, about five feet to the right of Shepard's. "Crewmembers, thank you very much. I'm nobody's sidekick."
"Associates," Liara T'soni chimed in from her chair, next over from Tali's.
"Fellow soldiers," offered Ashley Williams from the last chair in line.
Shepard silenced her crew with a quick glare. "Whatever you want to call them. Us. I'm going to assume you didn't sleep through the Reaper War."
"Or get hit on the head and lose your memories of it." Shepard glanced over at Liara. "What? Blows to the head frequently give humans amnesia. I saw it on Star-Crossed." Some of the smarter gangsters arrayed against ( ... )
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