Re: Shepard/Liara/asari!moresome [1/?]
anonymous
July 31 2014, 22:47:52 UTC
Here's the start of my fill for this. I decided to make it only two commandos, because it made things simpler, and it's lore that Commandos typically work in pairs. I also tried to spend some time to make up these two asari as people so they don't just becomes extra holes for Shepard and Liara to fuck. I hope it comes out well, and I hope you guys like it
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Re: Return of the Commandos [2/?]
anonymous
August 5 2014, 05:38:30 UTC
It makes me really happy to hear that, even this early on. I took some time to get into their heads--to the point where I might bring them in my regular fan-fic.
As a status message, I have up to part six edited and ready, and I only just got to the sexy bits. Just turned out I needed to set everything up. It's quickly shaping up to my Great American Mass Effect Porn Novel.
Re: Shepard/Liara/asari!moresome [1/?]
anonymous
July 31 2014, 23:08:02 UTC
DO'OH.
When I was writing, I couldn't remember what planet the Ardat-Yakshi mission was on, so I just wrote [planet] as a place-holder, and I forgot to look it up before I posted it.
So yes, the planet is Lesuss. Lesuss.
Moral of the story: this is why you should really edit your work before posting.
Re: Shepard/Liara/asari!moresome [3/?]
anonymous
August 6 2014, 22:51:27 UTC
It's back! ...No sex yet, just the set-up. I don't know, they just wouldn't let me get them to fuck without some character introduction and development first. I know, bad smut writer. But let's get to it
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Re: Shepard/Liara/asari!moresome [6/?]
anonymous
August 11 2014, 03:08:19 UTC
The cabin's door opened and Liara strode through with a purpose, Shepard following a few steps behind. She went down the step to the coffee table and found the little fridge that sat on the wall to the corner. She opened it and after hovering her hand over a bottle of beer, she took out a bottle of whiskey and the ice tray
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Re: Return of the Commandos [7/?]
anonymous
August 12 2014, 17:11:12 UTC
OMG. I cannot believe how hot that kissing session was... and what comes next. Yummy! :-)
I love the interactions between all of them. The playful commandos fighting over Shepard... will they fight over his cock too? OMG. If "Two asari wrestling over his cock" was not on Shepard's bucket list, he is not a man to me! :-D
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Will be eagerly looking forward to more!
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As a status message, I have up to part six edited and ready, and I only just got to the sexy bits. Just turned out I needed to set everything up. It's quickly shaping up to my Great American Mass Effect Porn Novel.
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When I was writing, I couldn't remember what planet the Ardat-Yakshi mission was on, so I just wrote [planet] as a place-holder, and I forgot to look it up before I posted it.
So yes, the planet is Lesuss. Lesuss.
Moral of the story: this is why you should really edit your work before posting.
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I love the interactions between all of them. The playful commandos fighting over Shepard... will they fight over his cock too?
OMG. If "Two asari wrestling over his cock" was not on Shepard's bucket list, he is not a man to me! :-D
Liara's comments are also priceless.
It's fantastic. Please keep this up! :-)
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