"Both Past and Present Tense" Saren/Nihlus 1/?
anonymous
December 8 2014, 04:59:39 UTC
[OP, I could not get this idea out of my head and was laid up sick with little more than a laptop to entertain me this weekend. My apologies for not including Shepard, but hopefully lots of turian smut will help. A!A is not synesthetic but hopes that this will satisfy!)
Saren Arterius had a problem, and that problem was Nihlus Kryik.
More specifically, Nihlus Kryik's hither-to unknown love of cuddling in his sleep.
Saren shifted uncomfortably, the bed in this damn cramped ship too small for two grown, male turians to share.
Damn council. First he'd wanted to take his ship, but the council had said no, that his ship was too risky. Then they'd tried for Nihlus', but any ship previously associated with any spectre was too risky, evidently. He'd asked that if they'd have to charter a ship, then at least let them have a ship with two beds, but of course, Tevos, in her infinite wisdom, decided that that was too extravagant for a quick run-and-gun mission on Omega. Sparatus had fought valiantly for their privacy, but Valern had seen no
( ... )
"Both Past and Present Tense" Saren/Nihlus 2/?
anonymous
December 8 2014, 05:05:20 UTC
Saren attempted to scoot closer to the wall - not that there was much room to maneuver. Nihlus followed, both arms wrapping tightly around his back.
“Mmmph.” Nihlus groaned. “C'mere.” His sub-vocals dripped with lust, and Saren's dick twitched in response.
Great. He had a raging erection and Nihlus fucking Kryik was evidently having a dream about one of his many asari friends. Friends Saren was decidedly not jealous of, it was not his fault his former apprentice and current partner had such disappointing taste in bed-mates...
He sighed. He should have just slept on the floor. It wasn't kind to his joints, but Nihlus was slowly driving him insane.
“Mmm, mi carissime ...” Nihlus moaned, and grabbed Saren's hips, pushing them closer together. Saren swallowed as phantom vibrations caressed his fringe.
The spirits were out to get him. Nihlus was evidently having quite the exciting dream, judging by the erection now poking between his thighs. What did the asari Nihlus was fucking in his brain look like? Was she one of his past lovers
( ... )
"Both Past and Present Tense" Saren/Nihlus 4/?
anonymous
December 8 2014, 05:12:56 UTC
“Mmm.” Nihlus' tongue flickered out, licking one of his horns as the phantom sensation hit his fringe. “Do you know how long I've wanted this? Wanted you?”
“Niihh...” He ground out, as Nihlus did a very thorough tongue cleaning of his fringe, his sub-vocals amplifying lustfully in a hum that made his cock pulse in Nihlus' eager hands.
“Wow, you're sensitive.” Nihlus groaned, his hips swaying to their motion. "Been a while?"
“Hnngh.” He gasped. “Vib-vibrations.”
“Oh.” Nihlus moaned, and squeezed down tight on his cock.
Saren shuddered. He was getting close - too close, and Nihlus' rock-hard cock sliding underneath him was decidedly not helping him in keeping from popping off like a cadet.
“Off.” He murmured, shaking off the brown turian.
“Wha?”
Saren rolled over, pulling his surprised apprentice - no, partner - close to him. “Your turn
( ... )
"Both Past and Present Tense" Saren/Nihlus 5/?
anonymous
December 8 2014, 05:18:57 UTC
Nihlus' mandibles bent low in a grin as he pulled his pants down, exposing his cock and then his spurs, and then finally his feet.
“Spirits.” Nihlus leaned on top of him, bending low until their thighs - and other, more sensitive places - were touching. “You're very good-looking, Saren. Even better than in my dreams.”
A finger traced a path down his cock, and Saren willed himself not to tremble. “Bigger, too, believe that or not.”
“Hmph.” He squirmed, uncomfortable with both word and deed, as Nihlus hummed. And that sent off a whole new range of new and intriguing sensitive vibrations, as the phantom fingers met Nihlus' own. Nihlus, for his part, seemed entirely focused on mapping out the terrain of his face.
“Never thought you'd be so sensitive. It's really turning me on, seeing you like this...” Nihlus's hips slipped forward into a slight thrust, and he rose up to meet it, one hand trapping their cocks together.
That shut the boy up, who made a strangled mmmph and shivered on top of him
( ... )
Re: "Both Past and Present Tense" Saren/Nihlus 6/?
anonymous
December 8 2014, 05:21:52 UTC
He opened his mouth and let his apprentice trace the dull spikes of his teeth. An odd feeling, uncomfortable, but he let Nihlus continue. Nihlus traced the soft roof of his mouth, then united his tongue with Saren's own, an undulating ribbon of sex and something that tasted of...of...
(Friendship? Lust? More?)
the passion shared between them. He moaned, his dick already hardening. Nihlus' movements mirrored his own, and he felt his apprentice's heavy cock swell against his thigh.
“Spirits.” Nihlus said as he withdrew and reverently cupped his face. “SpiritsHe nodded, and Nihlus grinned, his mandibles flapping out and hitting his fingers
( ... )
"Both Past and Present Tense" Saren/Nihlus 7/?
anonymous
December 8 2014, 05:25:51 UTC
Nihlus re-entered the room and Saren couldn't stop himself from looking at him as he sat back on the bed. He had a bottle of something, slightly obscured by a towel. “Thought you might want to...uh...”
“Thank you.” He reached for the towel, but Nihlus wordlessly denied him, patting his stomach with the towel instead.
“Nihlus, you - “
“I want to.” Nihlus said softly. “Please.”
He sat up on his elbows, watching Nihlus polish the odd white bone of his chest plates. Unlike Nihlus, he had no variation in color, in tone - he was all bone-white, from head to toe.
(Even Desolas, he remembered, had had some grey to his plates. Paleness was always rare, but his albinism came from his biotics. Eezo contamination in his skin tissue. Permanent. Nothing to be done about it. Desolas had told him not to dwell on it and for all the time they were together, he hadn't. After Desolas was gone, and he was the last Arterius, though, that last bit of pale white in a sea of brown - then, the doubts came, and they spiraled, filling the space in his
( ... )
Both Past and Present Tense" Saren/Nihlus 8/?
anonymous
December 8 2014, 05:30:03 UTC
“You, who once ran through downtown Cipritine with nothing but a smile on your face and a shotgun in your hands...gets nervous over being penetrated?” After a few easier strokes, he slipped a second finger, and Nihlus bucked against him.
“Element of surprise. Had to work with my...talents. Wasn't like they were going to like us there anyway. ”Nihlus squirmed, and he couldn't tell if it was his fingers or his memories that were causing such a reaction. Saren slowed down. “A barefaced Palaveni and a Taetrean? Worst combo ever for spying in Cipritine. Besides, I was the best damn distraction you could ask for, that mark never saw you coming.”
“You were.” He agreed, and he didn't miss how Nihlus gasped out loud as his fingers hit a spot deep inside him. Ready now, he thought. “A very good distraction. For someone who specializes in special ops.”
And then it hit him.
Palaveni. A barefaced Palaveni.“Hey, it's why I'm so val...Why did you stop
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Re: "Both Past and Present Tense" Saren/Nihlus 9/?
anonymous
December 8 2014, 05:37:23 UTC
“What?” Nihlus turned around and tilted his head, confused with the rapid switch in mood. He wiggled, trying to stand, but that only put him into a traditional female's position, on his arms and knees.
“You're not my fucking therapist.” He spat, and with that, leaned over and angled his dick into the boy in one clean thrust. Not the position he was thinking of, but he wanted to be in full control now. Nihlus couldn't see his eyes, wouldn't see the emotion behind him that he couldn't hide, couldn't hide now. It burned.
“Wha-argh.” Nihlus said, head still turned enough that Saren could see his eyes rolling into the back of his head. Shock. Let him be shocked.
Nihlus wasn't the one who had to relieve the hurt, he thought as he set a feverish pace, fucking his apprentice with a passion he hadn't had for years.
Nihlus wasn't the one who had to murder his only brother, the one who had to watch that feed as Desolas' eyes went wide and then there was fire and then there was nothing.
Any pain he was in was nothing compared to that,
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"Both Past and Present Tense" Saren/Nihlus 10/11
anonymous
December 8 2014, 05:43:03 UTC
Nihlus leaned back, pushing against him, and he pushed his dick deeper into his apprentice, hands pushing Nihlus' hips to his own.
He bent his head to the side, let Nihlus' fringe sweep over his shoulder. Green eyes met his own as his apprentice moved back to meet him, writhing. “Saren....”
Of all things, it was those damn eyes - shiny, brilliant - that mesmerized him, and he was surprised when, a few seconds later, Nihlus' eyes shut in a low, pulsing purr, and he felt a wetness leaking between his fingers.
“You came.” He said, gasping from the sensation Nihlus was pulsing through his fringe, and then he buried himself to the root in his apprentice, his only apprentice, the only man he'd ever....
...ever...
(“You are not alone,” Desolas whispered in a dusty memory, holding him tight as he keened into his big brother's cowl. “Mother is with you, and father, and I as well...No matter where you are, our spirits are always as one, and we will always love you.”)...wanted, truly wanted, in so long
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"Both Past and Present Tense" Saren/Nihlus 11/11
anonymous
December 8 2014, 05:52:51 UTC
“No.” Nihlus grinned, and tugged him down onto the cot. “Not a problem at all.”
“I'd hate to think you'd go back to your asari.” Saren said dryly, shocked by Nihlus' grin, mandibles so slack that he could practically scoop them off the floor.
“Shut up,” Nihlus had laughed, and then he'd made Saren do so, with lips and teeth and tongue.
- - -
At some point on the way back to the citadel, the bed broke in two, shattering underneath them while they were too...distracted...to notice
( ... )
Re: "Both Past and Present Tense" Saren/Nihlus 11/11
anonymous
December 8 2014, 23:22:43 UTC
Bless you A!A, that was precious and sexy and touching and funny all rolled up in one. Taetrean Nihlus is a really interesting concept too! It'd be interesting to hear more about him growing up on a place like that....
Ha! Funny enough A!A's other Saren & Nihlus story she is working on is right now about Nihlus meeting Saren on Taetrus for the first time... >_>
So uh, if you're interested, A!A could definitively indulge you in hearing more about Taetrean Nihlus.
(I really love the idea of Nihlus coming from one of the more troubled outer colonies originally - would explain his "calm under pressure" attitude, and why his family might have left Hierarchy space. I think the Evolution comic kinda alludes to Saren and Desolas being from Palaven, given Saren has a couple of lines about having a duty to Palaven.)
Thank you for the lovely comment to read when I got back from work. <3
Prompt OP
anonymous
December 11 2014, 05:34:38 UTC
HAHAHAHA Nihlus. Nihlus please. Well, I guess she deserved it. And that last line. BRILLIANT.
But oh, man, Saren. Poor guy ):
...ANYWAY. OP definitely appreciates this :D Lack of Shepard is no problem at all! Man, I really love these two, and you did such a fine job with this fill, A!A ♥ Definitely satisfied! And I was secretly hoping someone would write Saren as the one with synesthesia, hahaha. Definitely get to work on that prequel you mentioned.
...Also, I hope you feel better. Being sick is awful.
Saren Arterius had a problem, and that problem was Nihlus Kryik.
More specifically, Nihlus Kryik's hither-to unknown love of cuddling in his sleep.
Saren shifted uncomfortably, the bed in this damn cramped ship too small for two grown, male turians to share.
Damn council. First he'd wanted to take his ship, but the council had said no, that his ship was too risky. Then they'd tried for Nihlus', but any ship previously associated with any spectre was too risky, evidently. He'd asked that if they'd have to charter a ship, then at least let them have a ship with two beds, but of course, Tevos, in her infinite wisdom, decided that that was too extravagant for a quick run-and-gun mission on Omega. Sparatus had fought valiantly for their privacy, but Valern had seen no ( ... )
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“Mmmph.” Nihlus groaned. “C'mere.” His sub-vocals dripped with lust, and Saren's dick twitched in response.
Great. He had a raging erection and Nihlus fucking Kryik was evidently having a dream about one of his many asari friends. Friends Saren was decidedly not jealous of, it was not his fault his former apprentice and current partner had such disappointing taste in bed-mates...
He sighed. He should have just slept on the floor. It wasn't kind to his joints, but Nihlus was slowly driving him insane.
“Mmm, mi carissime ...” Nihlus moaned, and grabbed Saren's hips, pushing them closer together. Saren swallowed as phantom vibrations caressed his fringe.
The spirits were out to get him. Nihlus was evidently having quite the exciting dream, judging by the erection now poking between his thighs. What did the asari Nihlus was fucking in his brain look like? Was she one of his past lovers ( ... )
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Nihlus flexed again, and Saren allowed himself a tight stroke down his cock.
He groaned. 1, 2, 3...
Nihlus ground his hips against him, and Saren's hand squeezed tight.
1,2,3...
Nihlus' tempo began to increase, and Saren switched his own to match, running fingertips from his base to his tip.
1,2...
Nihlus thrust hard enough to jostle him, and Saren swallowed his annoyance at that as he ground desperately into his hand.
1, 2...
“Saren...” Nihlus whimpered, and Saren actually dropped his cock in surprise.
What?
Nihlus' next thrust overtook him, as he laid, speechless, for a moment.
Nihlus whimpered as his thrusts picked up steam and then he made a choked gasp into Saren's neck.
And then he stopped.
Saren frowned. They were close enough that Saren could tell he hadn't come - but his former student laid stock-still, pressed tight against him.
“Uhmmm....”
Fuck.He opened his eyes, but refused to turn back to ( ... )
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“Niihh...” He ground out, as Nihlus did a very thorough tongue cleaning of his fringe, his sub-vocals amplifying lustfully in a hum that made his cock pulse in Nihlus' eager hands.
“Wow, you're sensitive.” Nihlus groaned, his hips swaying to their motion. "Been a while?"
“Hnngh.” He gasped. “Vib-vibrations.”
“Oh.” Nihlus moaned, and squeezed down tight on his cock.
Saren shuddered. He was getting close - too close, and Nihlus' rock-hard cock sliding underneath him was decidedly not helping him in keeping from popping off like a cadet.
“Off.” He murmured, shaking off the brown turian.
“Wha?”
Saren rolled over, pulling his surprised apprentice - no, partner - close to him. “Your turn ( ... )
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“Spirits.” Nihlus leaned on top of him, bending low until their thighs - and other, more sensitive places - were touching. “You're very good-looking, Saren. Even better than in my dreams.”
A finger traced a path down his cock, and Saren willed himself not to tremble. “Bigger, too, believe that or not.”
“Hmph.” He squirmed, uncomfortable with both word and deed, as Nihlus hummed. And that sent off a whole new range of new and intriguing sensitive vibrations, as the phantom fingers met Nihlus' own. Nihlus, for his part, seemed entirely focused on mapping out the terrain of his face.
“Never thought you'd be so sensitive. It's really turning me on, seeing you like this...” Nihlus's hips slipped forward into a slight thrust, and he rose up to meet it, one hand trapping their cocks together.
That shut the boy up, who made a strangled mmmph and shivered on top of him ( ... )
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(Friendship? Lust? More?)
the passion shared between them. He moaned, his dick already hardening. Nihlus' movements mirrored his own, and he felt his apprentice's heavy cock swell against his thigh.
“Spirits.” Nihlus said as he withdrew and reverently cupped his face. “SpiritsHe nodded, and Nihlus grinned, his mandibles flapping out and hitting his fingers ( ... )
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“Thank you.” He reached for the towel, but Nihlus wordlessly denied him, patting his stomach with the towel instead.
“Nihlus, you - “
“I want to.” Nihlus said softly. “Please.”
He sat up on his elbows, watching Nihlus polish the odd white bone of his chest plates. Unlike Nihlus, he had no variation in color, in tone - he was all bone-white, from head to toe.
(Even Desolas, he remembered, had had some grey to his plates. Paleness was always rare, but his albinism came from his biotics. Eezo contamination in his skin tissue. Permanent. Nothing to be done about it. Desolas had told him not to dwell on it and for all the time they were together, he hadn't. After Desolas was gone, and he was the last Arterius, though, that last bit of pale white in a sea of brown - then, the doubts came, and they spiraled, filling the space in his ( ... )
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“Element of surprise. Had to work with my...talents. Wasn't like they were going to like us there anyway. ”Nihlus squirmed, and he couldn't tell if it was his fingers or his memories that were causing such a reaction. Saren slowed down. “A barefaced Palaveni and a Taetrean? Worst combo ever for spying in Cipritine. Besides, I was the best damn distraction you could ask for, that mark never saw you coming.”
“You were.” He agreed, and he didn't miss how Nihlus gasped out loud as his fingers hit a spot deep inside him. Ready now, he thought. “A very good distraction. For someone who specializes in special ops.”
And then it hit him.
Palaveni. A barefaced Palaveni.“Hey, it's why I'm so val...Why did you stop ( ... )
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“You're not my fucking therapist.” He spat, and with that, leaned over and angled his dick into the boy in one clean thrust. Not the position he was thinking of, but he wanted to be in full control now. Nihlus couldn't see his eyes, wouldn't see the emotion behind him that he couldn't hide, couldn't hide now. It burned.
“Wha-argh.” Nihlus said, head still turned enough that Saren could see his eyes rolling into the back of his head. Shock. Let him be shocked.
Nihlus wasn't the one who had to relieve the hurt, he thought as he set a feverish pace, fucking his apprentice with a passion he hadn't had for years.
Nihlus wasn't the one who had to murder his only brother, the one who had to watch that feed as Desolas' eyes went wide and then there was fire and then there was nothing.
Any pain he was in was nothing compared to that, ( ... )
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He bent his head to the side, let Nihlus' fringe sweep over his shoulder. Green eyes met his own as his apprentice moved back to meet him, writhing. “Saren....”
Of all things, it was those damn eyes - shiny, brilliant - that mesmerized him, and he was surprised when, a few seconds later, Nihlus' eyes shut in a low, pulsing purr, and he felt a wetness leaking between his fingers.
“You came.” He said, gasping from the sensation Nihlus was pulsing through his fringe, and then he buried himself to the root in his apprentice, his only apprentice, the only man he'd ever....
...ever...
(“You are not alone,” Desolas whispered in a dusty memory, holding him tight as he keened into his big brother's cowl. “Mother is with you, and father, and I as well...No matter where you are, our spirits are always as one, and we will always love you.”)...wanted, truly wanted, in so long ( ... )
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“I'd hate to think you'd go back to your asari.” Saren said dryly, shocked by Nihlus' grin, mandibles so slack that he could practically scoop them off the floor.
“Shut up,” Nihlus had laughed, and then he'd made Saren do so, with lips and teeth and tongue.
- - -
At some point on the way back to the citadel, the bed broke in two, shattering underneath them while they were too...distracted...to notice ( ... )
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So uh, if you're interested, A!A could definitively indulge you in hearing more about Taetrean Nihlus.
(I really love the idea of Nihlus coming from one of the more troubled outer colonies originally - would explain his "calm under pressure" attitude, and why his family might have left Hierarchy space. I think the Evolution comic kinda alludes to Saren and Desolas being from Palaven, given Saren has a couple of lines about having a duty to Palaven.)
Thank you for the lovely comment to read when I got back from work. <3
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But oh, man, Saren. Poor guy ):
...ANYWAY. OP definitely appreciates this :D Lack of Shepard is no problem at all! Man, I really love these two, and you did such a fine job with this fill, A!A ♥ Definitely satisfied! And I was secretly hoping someone would write Saren as the one with synesthesia, hahaha. Definitely get to work on that prequel you mentioned.
...Also, I hope you feel better. Being sick is awful.
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