Fill: Garrus/Ashley/Kaidan - "New Moon" 1/7 I thinktrappedinjamjarJuly 4 2015, 13:08:14 UTC
Questioning A!A from above (don't mind the journal, captcha wasn't loading for me anon for some reason) - sorry about the wait! I hate posting WIPs. This also became more about creating intimacy than already being in an intimate situation, and I don't even know how Kaidan got involved, but I hope you like it!
"You're shitting me."
Vakarian stares. "Why would I make that up?"
"To creep me out," says Ashley, which seems the obvious answer.
He rolls his eyes. "Creeping out my new squadmate. That sounds like a good idea."
Ashley turns to Alenko with a wordless appeal in her eyes, because surely there's no way turians can actually suck blood through their fangs and inject venom to stop their prey from panicking, but he simply gives her an apologetic shrug.
"Sorry, Williams, I've heard of this before," he says. "A couple of turians were talking about it on a joint forces op I was on a few years back."
"Holy crap," she says. "You're a vampire."
Vakarian gives a deep sigh. "No, I'm not. I'm not dead, for one, and as long as your
( ... )
"It's not an order; just a suggestion," he says quickly.
"Chief, it's not like I haven't noticed you're the most... distrusting person on this ship," Vakarian adds.
Ashley folds her arms and glares at Alenko. It hasn't even been thirty years since Shanxi. She's allowed to be a little suspicious of letting a cop with little regard for the law onto the fleet's most advanced ship.
"Unless you're scared?" says Alenko.
She glares harder, because she can never resist a dare and he's learning that quickly. "Yes, actually. Is that even safe? Because he might not be a vampire, but blood loss is never fun."
"I'd have to go to town to put you in any danger," says Vakarian. "And I'm not that hungry."
"I am a medic," Alenko points out. "I can supervise, and treat you if anything goes wrong."
Chakwas, she thinks, would put an end to this nonsense instead of suggesting and then encouraging it, but it's their CMO's shift on the sleeper pods and she's not about to interrupt some well earned sleep. And, well, she should be
( ... )
"Right." She pauses. "What, not going for the neck?"
"I'm not a vampire, and I don't actually want to kill you," he says, rolling his eyes. Carefully, he wraps his talons around her left wrist to lift her arm a little.
"Yeah, no, I'm calling medic veto on the neck," says Alenko. "I've never lost a soldier under my command before and I'm not about to start today."
"Lucky you," Ashley says, barely holding back her bitterness.
They both look away from her, Alenko rubbing the back of his neck. Ashley finds herself wondering what her old CO from the 212 would say if he saw her like this, with a turian holding her wrist and about to suck her blood. Probably I knew itEventually, Vakarian coughs, and gestures at her left arm. "We had a blood donation drive at the precinct once - I noticed all the humans had the needle in their arm
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She has no idea who he's talking to, but she's not about to refuse an order from a superior officer, so she does it again, and again until Vakarian's moaning around her wrist, his grip so tight on her leg that she expects him to rip through her fatigues. Of all the people in the galaxy to like having whatever they have on their head pulled, Garrus Vakarian is not one she would have expected.
Eventually, she slides her hand down the back of his head to where the plating stops and the softer, thinner skin of his neck begins. As she rakes her nails over the line where skin and plating meet, Vakarian closes his eyes and whimpers. How vocal he is about his pleasure is a surprise, but then, her feeling up the head on his shoulders is probably a surprise too.
"Is this what you're like in bed? Noisy?" she asks. It doesn't come out nearly as snarky as she intended
( ... )
Not a word comes out of her mouth when she arches under their hands and mouths, because there aren't words for the way her release sweeps through her. Vakarian disengages, probably scared of nicking some important artery while she writhes, but traces his talons over her waist, watching her, watching Alenko kiss her jaw, her cheek. It's only when she stills that he sits up and touches his forehead to hers
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She shrugs. "Alenko pretty much dared me to. Of course, if I'd known he'd get off on it..."
Vakarian gives a thoughtful hum. "That, I feel like I should have seen coming when he suggested it. But you surprised me too, Williams."
"Ash," she says.
"What?"
"You have my blood running through your digestive system," she says. "You can call me Ash."
"Ash," he says, testing it out, and she smiles without thinking. "There you go, surprising me again."
"What was the first surprise?"
She's prepared for him to say it was that she got off on it, for him to call her easy for coming fully clothed with a superior officer on her neck and an alien on her wrist. She's not prepared when he says, "You trusted me to drink your blood without killing you."
"I didn't trust you: I trusted Alenko. At first, anyway." She pauses to think. "How long until this stuff wears off
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Re: "New Moon" 7 ENDtrappedinjamjarJuly 5 2015, 11:02:33 UTC
Not the op, but I really enjoyed this. And ya, even with some of the really bad stuff that has come out, what girl doesn't at least consider fantasizing about vampires at some point?
Thank you! Yeah, I figured it was a safe enough assumption - Kaidan's surprise was more the fact that it was Ashley, Gunnery Chief Badass, than that it was vampires.
Now that I'm not squeeing uncontrollably, let me explain why this is awesome.
I love how casual Garrus is about it, just shrugging and sighing about how nobody will let him feed on them and how he's glum about not getting any warm meals, initially treating it as just a snack before it gets intimate.
And I absolutely adore sneaky manipulative Kaidan, damn pervert taking advantage of the situation! He was pretty funny, wonder how deep his ulterior motives ran...
If you might be interested, I've got a prompt for a sequel, but I wouldn't want to be pushy, this was fantastic.
I'm so glad you liked it! And thank you for the specific feedback on what you liked, that's always really helpful. Especially for Kaidan, as I think this was actually my first time writing him. I know how deep I was thinking his ulterior motives were as I was writing it, but I'm always curious about other people see it, and if wondering is more fun for you, I wouldn't want to ruin that :)
And I'd love to hear your sequel ideas. I was actually already thinking about a couple myself - Kaidan hasn't had a go, after all, and the venom and an orgasm would probably help with migraines; and of course Virmire is coming - but I'd love to hear what it's sparked for you.
Yeah it was great. I just really like how Garrus was in a huff about nobody letting him suck their blood. It's just a snack guys, no need to make this weird! As for nourishment, I think you handled it well. Personally I always thought the Dextro DNA allergy was kinda soft science but whatever. Could say he can filter out that stuff with fluids and not worry about it, maybe because animals on Palaven would try to poison predators sucking on them
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Kaidan's turn is definitely in the cards. I love the idea of saving them both at Virmire (might not end up being Shepard, though) and celebrating with a threesome. I'd already started poking at an angsty Virmire reaction but I might have to do both :) I'm just wrestling with RL, sickness, and some of my own fic at the moment as well, so might be a while before I pop back with a sequel.
Thank you A!A, I'll wait as long as I have to, just so long as I can be satisfied this is on the way!
Looking forward to a lovely (possibly anemia-inducing) threesome. Just one little niggling request, could it please be a true threesome, with Kaidan and Garrus just as interested in each other, rather than just them double teaming Ashley?
That one request out of the way, I wish you good times and will be waiting patiently.
"You're shitting me."
Vakarian stares. "Why would I make that up?"
"To creep me out," says Ashley, which seems the obvious answer.
He rolls his eyes. "Creeping out my new squadmate. That sounds like a good idea."
Ashley turns to Alenko with a wordless appeal in her eyes, because surely there's no way turians can actually suck blood through their fangs and inject venom to stop their prey from panicking, but he simply gives her an apologetic shrug.
"Sorry, Williams, I've heard of this before," he says. "A couple of turians were talking about it on a joint forces op I was on a few years back."
"Holy crap," she says. "You're a vampire."
Vakarian gives a deep sigh. "No, I'm not. I'm not dead, for one, and as long as your ( ... )
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"It's not an order; just a suggestion," he says quickly.
"Chief, it's not like I haven't noticed you're the most... distrusting person on this ship," Vakarian adds.
Ashley folds her arms and glares at Alenko. It hasn't even been thirty years since Shanxi. She's allowed to be a little suspicious of letting a cop with little regard for the law onto the fleet's most advanced ship.
"Unless you're scared?" says Alenko.
She glares harder, because she can never resist a dare and he's learning that quickly. "Yes, actually. Is that even safe? Because he might not be a vampire, but blood loss is never fun."
"I'd have to go to town to put you in any danger," says Vakarian. "And I'm not that hungry."
"I am a medic," Alenko points out. "I can supervise, and treat you if anything goes wrong."
Chakwas, she thinks, would put an end to this nonsense instead of suggesting and then encouraging it, but it's their CMO's shift on the sleeper pods and she's not about to interrupt some well earned sleep. And, well, she should be ( ... )
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"I'm not a vampire, and I don't actually want to kill you," he says, rolling his eyes. Carefully, he wraps his talons around her left wrist to lift her arm a little.
"Yeah, no, I'm calling medic veto on the neck," says Alenko. "I've never lost a soldier under my command before and I'm not about to start today."
"Lucky you," Ashley says, barely holding back her bitterness.
They both look away from her, Alenko rubbing the back of his neck. Ashley finds herself wondering what her old CO from the 212 would say if he saw her like this, with a turian holding her wrist and about to suck her blood. Probably I knew itEventually, Vakarian coughs, and gestures at her left arm. "We had a blood donation drive at the precinct once - I noticed all the humans had the needle in their arm ( ... )
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"I'm fine," she says ( ... )
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Eventually, she slides her hand down the back of his head to where the plating stops and the softer, thinner skin of his neck begins. As she rakes her nails over the line where skin and plating meet, Vakarian closes his eyes and whimpers. How vocal he is about his pleasure is a surprise, but then, her feeling up the head on his shoulders is probably a surprise too.
"Is this what you're like in bed? Noisy?" she asks. It doesn't come out nearly as snarky as she intended ( ... )
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She shrugs. "Alenko pretty much dared me to. Of course, if I'd known he'd get off on it..."
Vakarian gives a thoughtful hum. "That, I feel like I should have seen coming when he suggested it. But you surprised me too, Williams."
"Ash," she says.
"What?"
"You have my blood running through your digestive system," she says. "You can call me Ash."
"Ash," he says, testing it out, and she smiles without thinking. "There you go, surprising me again."
"What was the first surprise?"
She's prepared for him to say it was that she got off on it, for him to call her easy for coming fully clothed with a superior officer on her neck and an alien on her wrist. She's not prepared when he says, "You trusted me to drink your blood without killing you."
"I didn't trust you: I trusted Alenko. At first, anyway." She pauses to think. "How long until this stuff wears off ( ... )
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You have made OP a very, very happy person! That was cute and hot and intimate and it gave me warm fuzzy feelings, thank you!
Really that was a lot of fun.
Is it wrong that I want a sequel now? Because I have ideas...
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I love how casual Garrus is about it, just shrugging and sighing about how nobody will let him feed on them and how he's glum about not getting any warm meals, initially treating it as just a snack before it gets intimate.
And I absolutely adore sneaky manipulative Kaidan, damn pervert taking advantage of the situation! He was pretty funny, wonder how deep his ulterior motives ran...
If you might be interested, I've got a prompt for a sequel, but I wouldn't want to be pushy, this was fantastic.
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And I'd love to hear your sequel ideas. I was actually already thinking about a couple myself - Kaidan hasn't had a go, after all, and the venom and an orgasm would probably help with migraines; and of course Virmire is coming - but I'd love to hear what it's sparked for you.
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Looking forward to a lovely (possibly anemia-inducing) threesome. Just one little niggling request, could it please be a true threesome, with Kaidan and Garrus just as interested in each other, rather than just them double teaming Ashley?
That one request out of the way, I wish you good times and will be waiting patiently.
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