A Single Word - Chapter Eleven

Feb 25, 2012 21:49

Title: A Single Word - Chapter Eleven
Pairing: JongKey/Keyhyun.
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Angst, bullying, mentions of abuse.
Summary: The night a strange new person enters his life, everything changes for Key.
Word Count: 2,751
Notes: Yay. An update! So, there's a lot in this chapter. Dun dun dun. The next chapter's going to be pretty intense, so I ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, pairing: jonghyun/key, !fanfiction, length: chapter

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masterk3y February 26 2012, 08:33:20 UTC
Spot for hurryupthecakes <3

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hurryupthecakes February 29 2012, 04:34:56 UTC
No Jjong!! Whatever it is you're about to do, don't do it!!! This was definitely the most sad and disgusting chapter of a fic I've read in a long time. Poor kiddo. I just want to take him in my arms and protect him. My mom is always watching those crime investigation shows (the true documentaries, not the fictional dramas) and it's just so revolting to see how many sick psychopaths there really are out there.
That said, I can't wait to read the next chapter.

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masterk3y March 14 2012, 02:20:53 UTC
Aww. Disgusting sounds bad, but I guess it is true *nods* It really is terrible how many sickos there are out there, but that's humans for you.

Thank you so much! I hope to get it out soon. I'm a bit busy and stumped lately ^_^;;

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masterk3y February 26 2012, 08:34:00 UTC
Spot for ezri-sun :D here it is!

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ezri_sun February 26 2012, 13:53:00 UTC
First of all *hug* because I know how up in the air you were about writing the actual abuse out. But you had a good balance, you said what was needed, didn't drag it out but still gave a sense of what hell his life was like before he came to Key's ( ... )

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masterk3y March 14 2012, 02:28:06 UTC
I was a little up in the air, and I guess there were people who didn't want me to do it, but I did.

Oh yes. Communication is definitely an issue in this fic. You know, problems with communication is so prevalent, even in the most basic situations. It's so sad how people can have so many problems with just trying to communicate with one another. How do we say this? How do we get other people to understand us or where we're coming from? How do we help each other? It's definitely something that is an issue here, with Jjong not being able to communicate even to the point of most people. He's still so introverted.

Oh no...fourteen wasn't when he got there. It was just when things started getting worse there. His real age will actually be revealed later on. Minho does have a lot of making up to do, if he can ^.^

Yes. Well, there is a reason for him being there. We will see soon enough :) Thank you for the wonderful comment! *hugs* <3

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masterk3y February 26 2012, 08:34:36 UTC
Spot for ryotanfan29. Love you bb!

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ryotanfan29 February 28 2012, 06:47:38 UTC
*glomps* Ray!!~ <3

Jonghyun T.T I'm happy that Minho feels guilty! He better feel even more guilty for making Jonghyun feel so bad! Go find him and comfort him! Awww Key and his family are trying their best to looks for Jonghyun T.T Jonghyun, you have friends looking for you! You better not step into that house! Don't even think about it! That person who held you captive, i'll find out where he is and Taemin will get revenge! Is the dude like obsessed with teaching or something and what did Jonghyun do to make him that way? He might be afraid of losing everything and has lots of hate or love, or mental illness but he should take it out on a punching bag! T.T I mean who wants to hurt baby Jonghyun? He's pretty when he cries and all but he's so fluffy and adorable, and you just wanna hug him! T.T

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masterk3y March 14 2012, 02:30:56 UTC
Yes, Minho should feel guilty for being an ass. Hopefully he'll have put everything in perspective now that he heard what happened. Lol, your Jongho!

<.<;; Well, Jonghyun is definitely going to do something.

I would say he's a bit obsessed with teaching. Most criminally insane people have really odd ticks you could say. Yes, poor Jjong is so adorable that no one should hurt him.

*glomps* I've missed you! Thanks for reading. I hope I can start updating again soon. Things have been so messy here.

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ryotanfan29 March 14 2012, 21:59:14 UTC
Yes! He better cause my Jongho heart won't feel as bad! rofl <3 IDK why, but I think i'm shipping Taehyun in this story although it's suppose to be Jongkey and I'm suppose to like Jongho... It ain't my fault Taemin is taking good care of Jonghyun and Jonghyun is shippable with lots of people... rofl <3

I hope he doesn't get caught by that psycho T.T I feel bad for the dude for being obsessed with teaching but he's hurting Jonghyun so I don't feel as bad for him... The man needs help and support or go back to being a teacher or find a way to be a teacher without torturing people! lol <3 I think Jonghyun will have pout attacks and make people who want to hurt him faint!~ :D

*glomps* <3 <3 <3 Ray!!!~ <3 <3 <3 :D I missed you too!!!~ <3 *hugs* Don't stress yourself too much!~ Things have been extremely busy over here but we'll make it through somehow!~ *glomps* :D <3 <3 <3

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masterk3y February 26 2012, 08:35:06 UTC
Spot for nurmee~ ^.^

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ennxeli February 26 2012, 08:51:17 UTC
OMG *flails* for the first time in my layfuu I manage to be in the right place at the right time.. so I'm trying this spot-thing out RIGHT NOW!

*goes reading*

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masterk3y March 14 2012, 02:31:27 UTC
Keke ^^ Yay! I'm glad you were in the right place. I hope you liked it :/

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