, Insecurities

Oct 12, 2011 15:42

Title: Insecurities
Pairing: Minho/Jonghyun
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Smut, gay sex, a little bit of plot.
Summary: Jonghyun doesn't know what to make of his and Minho's situation, but he feels more and more like it's something that needs to be addressed.
Word Count: 6,685
Notes: Continuation of That New Car Smell. So, I can't resist Jongho. Plus, ( Read more... )

rating: nc-17, length: oneshot, pairing: minho/jonghyun, !fanfiction

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mintyfresh1 October 13 2011, 00:49:16 UTC
hvjdksaghdjsa i love jongho and i totally love this series ~ well done xD <3

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masterk3y October 13 2011, 01:15:57 UTC
Thank you! I'm really glad you love it! :DDD
Cause your Jongho is AWESOME, just saying! :D

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choi_minju October 13 2011, 01:06:45 UTC
Is this the final sequel of the story plot?
Sounds like it, but I guess I just want more JongHo with a bottom Jonghyun lol!
This resolvd everything in Jonghyun's bran and mne as well~ thank you~

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masterk3y October 13 2011, 01:18:44 UTC
Might or might not be *mysterious*
Well, if I continued it, there would have to be new plot introduced of course. I kind of wanted to give it closure with the possibility of coming back to it once I've written some of the other stuff on my list. Keke
Yes! Bottom Jonghyun is glorious. I'm sure I will write more Jongho in the future.
You're welcome! Thank you for reading! :D

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shan_ah_non October 13 2011, 15:19:08 UTC
lmaoooooooooo taekey is so cute akskkflglqkadkakgak *_*

idk if it's just me, but i think the use of penis sounds weir in smut. try using dick or cock? it sound sexier and hornier to some extent but this is just a suggestion, no offense or anything! ;;

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masterk3y October 13 2011, 17:23:28 UTC
I'm glad you like Taekey, lol. I enjoyed them too in this! :D

No offense taken. I do use dick and cock, along with penis, hardness, and erection. Not sure if there are any others. I think something like that comes down to preference. Personally, I can't stand weird metaphorical slang for it, like hot rod or magic stick. It just makes it comical to me. Sort of like penis is a little ... scientific maybe? I don't think I'll completely stop using it, because I like variety in my word usage. Sorry for when I do. But I'll think about it and keep it in mind ^_^

Thank for reading! And for giving me your honest opinion :)

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rainstormraider October 14 2011, 04:06:09 UTC
Okay....I know its supposed to be hot smutty sex, but seriously, it was also really romantic and happy and lovely and cute and gorgeous.
Plus I like how you didn't tow the party line and instead made bottoming in the JongHo relationship a non-issue.
This was written so well and in such a nice smooth way...
PERFECT.

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masterk3y October 14 2011, 19:39:11 UTC
I'm glad you appreciated it for more than just the smut! :DDD I really like the other parts that I worked in.
Keke. Yeah, I don't think it would necessarily be that much of an issue, at least it doesn't need to be in every fic. Keke.
Thank you!!! <3

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kiyabaybee October 14 2011, 22:11:33 UTC
Why am I enjoying JongHo so much these day?
Oh poor Minho was feeling it too cause when I was reading I was just like why is this guy being like this
The dialogue was possibly the best bits

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masterk3y October 14 2011, 23:22:53 UTC
Haha! I feel the same way! It just kind of jumped out at me and won't let go.
Yeah, Minho was more vulnerable than he was letting on :'(
Yes! That was my favorite part too. I love the way Minho and Jonghyun can be so playful ^.^
Thanks for reading, dear!

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