Title: Insecurities
Pairing: Minho/Jonghyun
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Smut, gay sex, a little bit of plot.
Summary: Jonghyun doesn't know what to make of his and Minho's situation, but he feels more and more like it's something that needs to be addressed.
Word Count: 6,685
Notes: Continuation of
That New Car Smell. So, I can't resist Jongho. Plus,
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Cause your Jongho is AWESOME, just saying! :D
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Sounds like it, but I guess I just want more JongHo with a bottom Jonghyun lol!
This resolvd everything in Jonghyun's bran and mne as well~ thank you~
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Well, if I continued it, there would have to be new plot introduced of course. I kind of wanted to give it closure with the possibility of coming back to it once I've written some of the other stuff on my list. Keke
Yes! Bottom Jonghyun is glorious. I'm sure I will write more Jongho in the future.
You're welcome! Thank you for reading! :D
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idk if it's just me, but i think the use of penis sounds weir in smut. try using dick or cock? it sound sexier and hornier to some extent but this is just a suggestion, no offense or anything! ;;
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No offense taken. I do use dick and cock, along with penis, hardness, and erection. Not sure if there are any others. I think something like that comes down to preference. Personally, I can't stand weird metaphorical slang for it, like hot rod or magic stick. It just makes it comical to me. Sort of like penis is a little ... scientific maybe? I don't think I'll completely stop using it, because I like variety in my word usage. Sorry for when I do. But I'll think about it and keep it in mind ^_^
Thank for reading! And for giving me your honest opinion :)
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Plus I like how you didn't tow the party line and instead made bottoming in the JongHo relationship a non-issue.
This was written so well and in such a nice smooth way...
PERFECT.
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Keke. Yeah, I don't think it would necessarily be that much of an issue, at least it doesn't need to be in every fic. Keke.
Thank you!!! <3
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Oh poor Minho was feeling it too cause when I was reading I was just like why is this guy being like this
The dialogue was possibly the best bits
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Yeah, Minho was more vulnerable than he was letting on :'(
Yes! That was my favorite part too. I love the way Minho and Jonghyun can be so playful ^.^
Thanks for reading, dear!
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