A Single Word - Chapter Five

[masterk3y]

Title: A Single Word - Chapter Five
Pairing: JongKey. Also some Minkey. Could be more, depending on whether or not this develops the way I intend :)
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Angst, mentions of abuse.
Summary: The night a strange new person enters his life, everything changes for Key.
Word Count: 1,530
Notes: This chapter is a little short, but I

Comments

[kasayu]

Waaah what is that, such a cliffhanger! TAT
But this is great! I love it and I will repeat it with each chaper! ♥

I see so many little details that I like. The way Key pouted at the fact that Minho thinks only about football or the rumour about Jjongie being raised by animals (okay, that one made the inner nerd in me giggle, idek) but it's the overall feeling~ I literally felt scared for Jjong and I could feel Key's tension from how the other will managed his first day in school and omg you leave us with this asfghjl lol it's okay though TAT

"Key knew all about those sorts of feelings, about being afraid of being different, but he could hide how he was. It was impossible for Jonghyun to hide how the things he’d been through affected him" This is my fave part. T~T

[masterk3y]

Yes. I left it there for a specific reason for the next chapter ;)
Thank you! I'm so glad you love it! :DDD

Aww. I'm so glad you like those little details. I love including things like that in a story. I think it adds a lot of depth and makes me happy to think about ^.^

I'm glad you liked that part! I really did too ;_;
Thank you so much for reading! <3

[kasayu]

No problem at all!
I can't wait for the next chapter already, really I am usually quite lazy to read long stories but this is the first one since August that really caight me, so I won't let go! :D

[masterk3y]

*__* That makes me so happy! Honestly, I have trouble following long, chaptered stories too, so that really means a lot to me! <333

[nurmee]

Just how I expected things to turn out ugh.
different classes. away from key. helpless jjong is helpless.
i hope he will be able to befriend someone in his new class as soon as possible. or maybe the student will be extra careful with him. but i doubt it. after reading those rumors. ;____;

i just love to read how key feels himself being responsible for Jonghyun and is all worried about him, considering him first being totally freaked out by our puppy, makes me love him even more. /sighbias<3

thx for sharing <3 ilovedit.

[masterk3y]

;_; I know. Poor little Jjong. The world is a scary place. There are good things and bad things to come for him. I hope you'll enjoy it! <.<

Key is my bias too. I adore him ^.^ Yes, he's cute being worried about Jjong as much as he is :D

Thank you for commenting again! They make me very happy :DDD