A Single Word - Chapter Six

Nov 02, 2011 19:11

Title: A Single Word - Chapter Six
Pairing: JongKey. Also some Minkey. Could be more, depending on whether or not this develops the way I intend :)
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Angst, bullying, mentions of abuse.
Summary: The night a strange new person enters his life, everything changes for Key.
Word Count: 2,723
Notes: Well, it's a bit longer. Keke. I ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, pairing: jonghyun/key, !fanfiction, length: chapter

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masterk3y November 3 2011, 00:18:06 UTC
Spot for hurryupthecakes. Enjoy~<3

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masterk3y November 3 2011, 00:18:39 UTC
Spot for bb, ryotanfan29! <3

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ryotanfan29 November 3 2011, 03:19:55 UTC
awww :( Jonghyun doesn't get any peace, even when he sleeps.. T.T *hugs him* So he used to be normal and go to school!~ That guy sitting behind him needs to mind his own business and not bother Jonghyun before Taemin snaps, brings his evil minions and declares war on that poor dude! <3 Do the teachers know what happened to Jonghyun, so they don't say anything? Jonghyunnie is so cute thinking that Key is leaving him!~ Clubs? After school? :( Key better not leave Jonghyun alone. Well, he can if Jonghyun joins a choir or a club that deals with singing *coughs*or cosplay *coughs*!~ :D <3 So the man that hurt him is his step mother's boyfriend/husband?
*hugs*

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masterk3y November 3 2011, 05:13:10 UTC
;_; It is really sad. Mhmm. He used to be normal, but then some stuff happened. More will be explained later of course ^^

HAHA! I love you! Ahh. I can't wait till Taemin finally shows up in this XD I just wish he really had evil minions. That would be priceless!
Yeah. We'll see more of the clubs thing soon~ Keke
Mhmm~ You read correctly, although not husband <.<

Thank you so much for commenting, bb! <333

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ryotanfan29 November 4 2011, 00:51:24 UTC
*sobs* It is very T.T *glomps*

hehehe!~ I love you too!~ *hugs* I can't wait either!~ I have a fun time imagining him with his evil minions!~ Makes life much n=more fun and interesting!~ lol <3
hehehe!~ I swear you make me imagine lots of random possibilities, just to make it feel like i'm not waiting for the next chapter!~ lol <3 So it's the boyfriend?!~ Time for Taemin to attack!~ yays!~ lol <3

:D *glomps*

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masterk3y November 3 2011, 00:19:09 UTC
Spot for my dear, ezri_sun. I hope you like this update ^.^

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ezri_sun November 3 2011, 03:48:36 UTC
I love how we finally get to see the world from Jjong's point of view. Its a lot of change, and this to me pretty much proves that he isn't quite ready to deal with the outside world especially given the high level of abuse that is being strongly hinted at. Words may not leave physical marks but their effects can last longer then it takes for a broken bone to heal ( ... )

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masterk3y November 3 2011, 05:52:54 UTC
I'm glad you liked seeing it from Jonghyun's perspective. Mhmm. He really does need a lot more help than he's getting, but sadly not everyone gets the help they need or even deserve. I think it will become more obvious to others. It really can take longer for emotional wounds to heal than something like a broken bone, sometimes they can last forever ( ... )

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ezri_sun November 3 2011, 14:21:32 UTC
I feel like I should laugh evilly or something after this comment as I keep hitting on the right things :)

It was also I read this right after a 9hour shift at work who can't seem the term "modified duties" and keep putting me on positions I shouldn't be working.... but yeah, you did it well!

I'm glad my comments make you so happy, reading your responses make me feel happy as well!

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masterk3y November 3 2011, 00:45:37 UTC
I knew there was someone else I wanted to leave a spot for! ;_;

Keke. I would really love it if you would kick this kid's ass. How could he pick on Jjong like that? :'(
Although I'm the one who wrote it. Ahhh! X_X

I'm glad you think they're cute. I do too ^.^ Thank you for commenting and reading so quickly! <3

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kasayu November 3 2011, 08:33:32 UTC
Yay! I'm so happy that we could finally read more about Jjong and things from his point of view!
I had this heavy feeling settled down in my stomach the entire time I was readng... ugh, I think I was imagining things too vividly .__. You did really great at conveying especially all those school-fears. And the memories of that person (would that be his step-father?) are so freaking scary, poor Jjong, having to live with these D: And I'm so scared of what happened to him that he's the way he is now. Though I can't wait to get to know more :33
Btw. I loved the metion that he was popular back then... of course he would. And the need to feel important to someone, to Key, hopefully he'll get some of it ;~;
Aww can't wait for next update! <3

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masterk3y November 5 2011, 03:41:09 UTC
Aww, yeah some things in this chapter can be scary if you visualize them too much ;_; Thank you. I really enjoy writing about emotions like that. Keke X_X
Yeah, sort of like a step-father. There will be more information about him a little later in the story.
Of course little Jjong was popular :DDD

Thank you so much for the sweet comment <3 I hope you'll enjoy more when I update ^.^

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