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A Single Word - Chapter Ten

Feb 15, 2012 08:28

Title: A Single Word - Chapter Ten
Pairing: JongKey.
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Angst, bullying, mentions of abuse.
Summary: The night a strange new person enters his life, everything changes for Key.
Word Count: 2,469
Notes: This chapter was very difficult for me. As something that I've been planning since the beginning, of course I would be ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, pairing: jonghyun/key, !fanfiction, length: chapter

Comments 30

masterk3y February 15 2012, 14:30:24 UTC

Spot for hurryupthecakes ~<3 Hope you're still reading this ^.^;

hurryupthecakes February 16 2012, 03:33:31 UTC

Yes I am!! I've just been super busy lately getting ready for an interview/parent teacher conferences so I forgot to comment on the last chapter. But I will read/comment on this one as soon as Saturday rolls around!

hurryupthecakes February 21 2012, 04:21:06 UTC

Poor Jonghyun!! This whole situation is just so tough for everyone, but Minho has to go and make things even worse. Selfish, insensitive chunkhead! Ugh.
The only complaints I have about this chapter are that it wasn't long enough, and there wasn't enough Key! Can't wait to read the next dramatic chapter ^^

masterk3y February 28 2012, 15:26:12 UTC

:( I know. Minho has been making things more difficult. Hehe. I'm sorry they aren't long enough for you. I'll try to work on that ^.^

masterk3y February 15 2012, 14:30:57 UTC

Spot for ezri_sun! Enjoy :DDD

ezri_sun February 15 2012, 15:59:52 UTC

I'm getting the overwhelming feeling that Jonghyun may do something really, really stupid soon. From so many different angles he's getting the impression that he's useless and unwanted from everyone. Its something he is far too used to and only serving to reinstate the values and self image that he was given in his old home. Just when there seemed to be breakthroughs happening everything is back paddling and no one is helping ( ... )

masterk3y February 16 2012, 16:50:09 UTC

:( Everything is getting messed up for Jonghyun right now, and he has no idea how to fix things. It's really hard, coming from where he's been, for him to figure out how he fits into not just Key's family, but the world in general. It's something that will take a really long time, and no doubt he will always deal with a certain amount of trauma. *sobs* why do I do this?

I think Taemin understands him to a point <.< >.> Of course, he doesn't really know what happened either and hasn't been through quite the same things. But he's a really good person for Jonghyun to have around, not just now, but in the future as well.

Opening up more is what he needs, but he's not quite there yet *shifty eyes*

Thank you so much for commenting! I've blabbered on again <.<;

masterk3y February 15 2012, 14:31:27 UTC

Spot for ryotanfan29. Update! ^.^ *hugs*

ryotanfan29 February 16 2012, 00:41:55 UTC

*hugs* Yay update!~ Ray!~ *glomps*
Poor Hyunnie T.T His classmate is a jerk so is Minho.Do you think he wanted to be this way? He's just afraid and you know nothing about him! Well, I don't either but he only wanted to feel safe, loved, have friends, and be normal! Thank god for Taemin, he make Hyunnie feel happy!

So the man who held Hyunnie captive was his "Uncle" or a good friend who either was obsessed with him or hated him? But Jonghyun, don't listen to those thoughts! You're not a burden and you're not bringing anyone danger! Even if you think you are, don't do anything stupid like going back or killing yourself! Remember Taemin's evil minions will protect you! Key, stop making Hyunnie feel guilty and stuff!

masterk3y February 16 2012, 16:55:49 UTC

Keke ^.^
They are jerks. Of course I think his classmate is more of one <.< Taemin is wonderful for Jonghyun to have, but he can only do so much when Jonghyun wants all of those things too :'(

Yeah...you're pretty much getting it. I think probably a little bit of both *nods* Lol, those are definitely worst case scenario. Aww! Thank you so much for reading and commenting! <3

ryotanfan29 February 17 2012, 02:49:27 UTC

hehe!~ <3
Agreed, the classmate is more of one! Still can't dislike Minho that much.. lol <3 Yes, Taemin is!~ I might as well ship Taehyun instead of Jongho because Minho's a meanie... lol <3 jk <3 I hope Jonghyun realizes how awesome he is and that Taemin doesn't get stressed and think Jonghyun is a burden. May their beautiful friendship last T.T <3 Freaking classmates need to be more accepting and mind their own business instead of emotionally scarring others. They might just be stressed themselves and want to take it out on someone else but it's not right T.T

hehehe!~ <3 Yeah, those are T.T I hope he doesn't create another shell and hide from everyone... It would be interesting though.. *sighs* I really am evil... but I love it.. lol <3 Yw!~ *glomps*

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masterk3y February 15 2012, 14:32:01 UTC

Spot for nurmee :D Hope you enjoy this chapter!

chibiyoko February 15 2012, 18:39:04 UTC

But noooooooo, but Minho you fucker!
Shit. Jonghyun. :'(
Fuck man this is heartbreaking. Why did you stop? I need to know what's going to happen next?
I don't know but this I think every single day is getting harder and harder for Jjong, he keeps everything inside! Update soon! This fanfiction is just so asdfghjkl.

masterk3y February 16 2012, 16:58:20 UTC

*sobs*
I didn't really ^.^ Because I've already written like half of the next chapter, right after posting this. Kekeke.
*nods* It is getting harder for him, partially because of the people around him getting frustrated that things aren't changing, and partially because he is D':
I will update soone! Much sooner than last time, I promise. Thanks for reading!