Parade Puppets.

[masteroftoys]

“So, this is the place?” the young journalist asked stepping into the warehouse-like building. The inside was brightly lit and several large parade floats were sitting in a row. The journalist was a young girl, probably early twenties and just about to graduate collage. She had short red hair and a well tanned face dotted with freckles.

“Yes, this

Comments

[anonymous]

I liked what you tried with this short, and I think it mostly works. April sounds like she would be a fun toy, and I liked that the two exec's thought of the performers differently.

But you just need one more paragraph. Maybe two, dealing with April coming back to the park (either on her own or by coercion) so we get a glimpse of her doll changes.

By the way, that's a pretty cute costume.

--EL_Refresho