AWOS main writing challenge

[masteroth]

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This is my entry for the main writing challenge in AWOS, topic A: 'It doesn't matter if you want it back'.
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NO SECOND CHANCESI stared into his eyes so full of

Comments

[hafwit]

You're really getting some writing done! Awesome. :-)

[masteroth]

Thank you! I don't know what has gotten into me! LOL.

[muchtooarrogant]

H'm, that's a much kinder personification of Death than we usually see, I like it! It was cool to watch their silent interactions, he would think of something, realize his shortcomings, and then realize that he was as transparent to Death as glass.

Good job.

Dan

[masteroth]

Hehehehe, thank you. I guess you can call him death - maybe I haven't put out enough clues to really show that it's god I'm talking to, and the door is the gate to heaven. ;-)

[masteroth]

It's always cool with different 'decipherings' though. :-D

[muchtooarrogant]

Ah, interesting. The thought that it was God nevver occurred to me, but that's probably just because I tend to be more intrigued by mythological figures. I think you've probably got plenty of hints there, but you know us readers, always wanting to put in our own interpretations. *grin*

Dan

[sonicsonia]

wow! impressed. and a bit claustrophobic. but i like your way of writing! interesting and keep going!

[masteroth]

Aww, thank you so much dearie!!! Long time no hear! HUGS