FIC - NUMBER ONE

Oct 18, 2014 02:35

Fandom: SHINee, EXO
Characters: Taemin, Jongin (Kai)
Pairings: Taekai
Genre: canon, comedy, fluff
Rating: R, yaoi, rps
Status: Complete
A/N: Unbetaed.
Dedication: Carolina, this is for you since it was today's flail-convo that inspired this. <3 Hope you enjoy!
Summary: Taemin has many, varied ways with which to make Jongin's life hard.

Fic - Number One )

category: rps, rating: r, pairing: taekai, fandom: shinee, fandom: exo, genre: yaoi, status: complete

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Comments 19

diamondacequeen October 18 2014, 20:24:46 UTC
Yes, it turned out sappy, but that's great! I think your ending really wrapped up what Taekai are for a lot of people. Lots of sexual tension, but also lots of love and complete adoration for each other. It's true. They're more brotp for me, but I know how special they are. I don't know why, but I feel like this is something they would do. Taemin would get in the mood to be all sexy and mysterious and Jongin would be all confused and suffering lol. Oh, they love each other so much and I love them so much for it! I think you did an awesome job with this. Thanks for such wonderful Taekai to add to my list! :D

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matchynishi October 18 2014, 20:56:17 UTC
omg thank you for such a lovely review. <333 So happy they worked for you here... even tho they're brotp for you, you're osm for giving this a chance and saying such lovely things to me idk how to deal. T_T <333 BUT YES TO EVERYTHING YOU SAID ABOUT TAEKAI they're so great. :(

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diamondacequeen October 20 2014, 01:06:24 UTC
OH MY GOD YOUR ICON HAS TOHRU HONDA IN IT!!!! Bless you, lol. ♥
And, yeah, it totally worked! Honestly, I'm willing to give pretty much any pairing a try, and I've read some romantic Taekai before. What you've written here was just perfect. "All I ever do is indulge you." Just. Beautiful. One line that sums up basically this whole fic and their whole relationship, I think. Oh, look, Tohru lured me in and now I'm rambling again lol. Once again, thank you for posting this and dedicating it to Carolina, cause that's how I found it!

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matchynishi October 20 2014, 01:48:55 UTC
YES TOHRU IS GREAT and she's my default icon here kskafd I've been told this icon is very me, so you can guess how I am. XDDD ilu for the tohru love. ♥

Really glad you said that, coz even after all the videos and stuff I watched, sometimes what you come up with when it comes to interactions can only work in your head, lol, which was what I was afraid of... especially since the both of them interact less, with being in different groups... so thankful for taemin's solo for solidifying what I had imagined for them, sfag,alkl. well, that and, I love writing taemin as a bit of a brat. XD

yeah Carolina's my go-to for taekai flail, and is why this fic exists, I'm so thankful to her...and to you, you guys are the best. \:D/

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flamesword October 20 2014, 03:21:33 UTC
heeeeeeeeee PERFECTION AS ALWAYS. THAT IS PROPER MATCHYFIC RIGHT THAR. ;D

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matchynishi October 20 2014, 03:34:01 UTC
sobbing, you know ilu ♥♥♥

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flamesword October 20 2014, 03:41:27 UTC
ilu too ofc! ♥

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becroberts October 20 2014, 10:27:57 UTC
Aww, your taekai fluff is so wonderful. <3 Jongin having to cultivate his blank idol face earlier out of self-preservation, Taemin having neither heart nor soul, Taemin making Jongin guess, Jongin seeing all these amazing things about Taemin that Taemin can't see in himself...they are lovely together. ^_^

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matchynishi October 20 2014, 21:44:01 UTC
they are lovely, and also addicting khfhkscld I have a bunch of fics started lol. OTL i'm glad it worked for you, coz I know more of taemin than jongin, still... <333

ps: hope you're feeling better re: the luhan thing? :(

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becroberts October 21 2014, 18:16:31 UTC
Yay for more matchyfic! ^_^ I cheer you on from across the ocean.

I am, thank you. I was at MC's place over the weekend and we watched them on a Chinese show and I didn't even tear up, seeing Lu Han, so I think it'll be okay. It helps that I'm not angry at him, just sad. I guess I'll miss him more when their cons start up again and suddenly I am only half as motivated to collect fancams.

But! Look what a lovely reader drew for me! Jongin in a version of Tifa's outfit! (And she's working on Jongin/Yixing/Kris in dresses, because I have them infiltrating Don Corneo's mansion in one scene. I am so excited to have FFVII/EXO fanart!)

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matchynishi October 23 2014, 06:00:42 UTC
<3

:( i'm glad you're doing alright, but can't even begin to imagine... i was such a mess after jin left kat-tun lol. sigh. i hope luhan gets better physically and has a great chinese career, he's so darn popular there!

..............the collar makes it omfg. DRESSES diessssssss

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supremekoi November 10 2014, 12:48:52 UTC
"All I ever do is indulge you," WAHHHHHHHHHHHH TRUEEEEE omg taekai inspires way too many all-caps i just can't hold back, they are too much

thank you so much for writing this!! oh my god it was hilarious but also super sweet??? like jongin is just so...taemin is also so...the way they seamlessly go from teasing each other to being gross and sappy to each other just makes me want to bang my head against walls. plus the way taemin totally has jongin in the palm of his hand and effortlessly works him up is so so so taemin. also that bit where jongin is remembering taemin looking at himself and not being able to see what taemin sees in the mirror because all he can see is how beautiful taemin is...that wrecked me /crawls away to cry in a hole somewhere

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matchynishi November 11 2014, 05:56:40 UTC
NO DON'T HOLD BACK flailing in caps is the best flail ESPECIALLY WITH TAEKAI AAAAH

"like jongin is just so...taemin is also so..." <--- i know exactly what you mean. T___T idk how to express it either aslkdfjlk;jv

i really love that taemin knows at least some of what he does to jongin, it's part of how he's such a little shit akljfa;lja but THEY LOVE EACH OTHER SO MUCH and it's all so perfect aaaaaah I can't even put like 5% of the emotions i have in my head when i write things they are so overwhelming. <33333

i'm really glad you liked that part at the end coz that short couple of paragraphs is one of my personal favourite bits that I've written... like, idk, i wrote it and then when i was reading it over i was like !! it's sappy as heck but i couldn't help it omg they're so al;skjdafl;ajsa

thank you so much for commenting ilu

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brandnewwind November 14 2014, 18:43:52 UTC
I'M DYING IT'S SO THEM I CANNOT DEAL
I love it so much ;______; your narrating pace is so effortless, i love everything about your writing

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matchynishi November 15 2014, 00:48:26 UTC
la;sjfals i'm glad you liked. :D thank you so much you're too nice OTL

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