Comments | matilda_wagler: the finished product, REREAD THIS

matilda_wagler

the finished product, REREAD THIS

Mar 14, 2004 21:51

Updating The Society of Spectacle ( Read more... )

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ramona_moeron March 14 2004, 22:18:33 UTC

I think it is really interesting thus far, and you should either post the rest of it or e-mail it to me so I can finish it-The only real coment I have is check the punctuation and spelling, one time you say 'will will' and I think you mean 'will we', but that probably isn't that much help to you; I would make a really shody editor...

blahrgh elephantautopsy March 15 2004, 05:34:36 UTC

Hi. I like this a lot, but I have a complaint. I feel the part about "I will deconstruct my socialization" is as impossible as "I will grant everyone world peace." Like, NOT being able to deconstruct it is inherent to being socialized. So I would say something more along the lines of, "I will ATTEMPT to deconstruct the forms through which we think of our personal narratives." Or something. Like, be more specific I guess. Or atleast acknowledge that you're stuck inside the bubble of socialization and how it's impossible to see the big picture from the outside, objectively... do you know what I mean? Also, can you pleeeease call me at work, 2125948050... i need you to email me something, I forgot a paper for school at home. Thankya catharine!