I would be creeped out a bit by a secret admirer too...and honestly, Tony has good reason to be. I thought you did a fabulous job of explaining/justifying his reaction.
I wouldn't mind seeing more...like what happens that night.
Hello and welcome back! How have you been? Life treating you well? Me likes very much the new layout.
Wow. This was really fluff, you weren't kidding. I like fluff (to a point - this didn't cross the yuck-line), don't get me wrong but coming from you? You're all about the angst and agony and writhing in pain with a deeper meaning, are you not? I don't mind this though, it was good and cute and it's good to see you trying to get the muse back.
Me, I'm quietly screaming in my head. I'm so stuck and without any stimulation: One G/D story (about 11,000 words written) One DiNozzo/McGee story (approx. 1500 written) One McKay/Sheppard - SGA story (about 3000 written) I wish to write more, the G/D one is going to be 25,000 when finished, IF I ever finish. The thing is with the limited time (oh yes, being at work and having the baby wasn't enough for me - now I'm also studying, trying to get a degree of somekind) and my evergrowing fannishness with Stargate Atlantis. Oh McShep.Seriously, nicely done and I hope this'll open the wordly chest
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Hi Matt. SO happy to see a fic from you! Sorry to hear about your Muse being stubborn... It's been a long time. Someone needs to slap some sense into her/him. ;)
Anyway -- LOVED this. Yes, it was a bit off from your usual angst fest (which I adore, btw) but it still read with the brilliant aplomb I have come to expect from you. Your descriptions are amazing and give me vivid visuals so I feel like I'm watching this unfold from just over your shoulder.
Tony being creeped out by the secret admirer was very funny. I loved that he viewed the chocolate gifts with distrust... maybe even a touch of fear. Gibbs playing along, tossing the candy bar into the trash, was a nice touch -- as was Gibbs watching from behind the railing and scarfing a Kiss as he turned away. I have no doubt that he'll get his man -- exactly when and where he wants him.
Thanks for posting and I hope to see more from you! :)
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I would be creeped out a bit by a secret admirer too...and honestly, Tony has good reason to be. I thought you did a fabulous job of explaining/justifying his reaction.
I wouldn't mind seeing more...like what happens that night.
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Wow. This was really fluff, you weren't kidding. I like fluff (to a point - this didn't cross the yuck-line), don't get me wrong but coming from you? You're all about the angst and agony and writhing in pain with a deeper meaning, are you not? I don't mind this though, it was good and cute and it's good to see you trying to get the muse back.
Me, I'm quietly screaming in my head. I'm so stuck and without any stimulation:
One G/D story (about 11,000 words written)
One DiNozzo/McGee story (approx. 1500 written)
One McKay/Sheppard - SGA story (about 3000 written)
I wish to write more, the G/D one is going to be 25,000 when finished, IF I ever finish. The thing is with the limited time (oh yes, being at work and having the baby wasn't enough for me - now I'm also studying, trying to get a degree of somekind) and my evergrowing fannishness with Stargate Atlantis. Oh McShep.Seriously, nicely done and I hope this'll open the wordly chest ( ... )
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Anyway -- LOVED this. Yes, it was a bit off from your usual angst fest (which I adore, btw) but it still read with the brilliant aplomb I have come to expect from you. Your descriptions are amazing and give me vivid visuals so I feel like I'm watching this unfold from just over your shoulder.
Tony being creeped out by the secret admirer was very funny. I loved that he viewed the chocolate gifts with distrust... maybe even a touch of fear. Gibbs playing along, tossing the candy bar into the trash, was a nice touch -- as was Gibbs watching from behind the railing and scarfing a Kiss as he turned away. I have no doubt that he'll get his man -- exactly when and where he wants him.
Thanks for posting and I hope to see more from you! :)
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