Snarry Ficaton

[mattmel]

Hello again!
This is my story for the Snarry Ficathon. I wrote it for Isidore.
A very big THANK YOU to Amanda Saitou for a perfect beta work.
All remainig mistakes are mine! :)

Title: A Lesson Learnt The Hard Way
Author: MattMel
E-Mail: hardyfan@gmx.de
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Spanking, light bondage, Master/Slave
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing

Comments

A Lesson Learnt The Hard Way

[anonymous]

"Hey darling, good to have you back, are you OK?"

How long has Severus been an American teenager? Did you even *think* about what you were doing?

Many people, who have half a mind to write fan-fiction, unfortunately do.

I'm afraid I have to agree.

[silvarbelle]

That whole "Hey, darling, good to have you back, are you OK?" thing was a bit too much.

Never mind the whole RUN-ON SENTENCE issue, but I simply cannot imagine Severus Snape using such mundane words or phrases as OK and HEY.

If it's important to you, try to work a bit harder on getting Snape closer to character.

[isidore13]

Wow, thank you so much! :D

[mattmel]

No need to thank me. I'm glad you like it.

[anonymous]

I really enjoyed this story. I liked it so much that I came back to it today to read it all over again.
Lalla

[mattmel]

WoW Thank you, I'm happy that you like this story so much.

[evionn]

finally I've the time to write you that I like your story, even if it's a short one :-)
nevertheless the story sounds familiar to me, but I don't know wherefrom.
What was the safe word? Why could it embarrass Sev?? I'm glad you joined the HP fandom!
And thanx a million that you reminded me of fanfiction, now I know what I've missed the last 2 years. =(^-^)=

[mattmel]

Du kennst die Story!!! Ich habe sie mal im Wrestling Fandom geschrieben, mit Jeff als "Dom" und Matt als "Sub". Ich habe sie für den Ficathon nur umgeschrieben.
Ich habe an kein bestimmtes Save Word gedacht und meinte auch nicht das, das Word Sev in Verlegenheit bringt, sondern der Fakt das Harry 'saven' muß.

Bye Mel

[evionn]

ah ich glaube mich dunkel daran zu erinnern.
steht die original story auf deiner homepage?

ok dann hab ich das mit dem save word falsch verstanden *shrug*
hoffe dennoch, dass du bald wieder zeit findest noch ein paar snarry fics oder remus/sev fics zu schreiben :D

[mattmel]

Ja sie ist unter dem gleichen Namen auf meiner Homepage.
Das mit der Zeit hoffe ich auch, es macht Spaß mal wieder was neues zu probieren.
Kein prob mit dem falsch versten, ist ja auch nicht so einfach.