Rush to Stop

[maudlinsky]

Rush to Stop
Block B: Jaehyo/Kyung
649 words, rated PG

Comments

[blackheart_lies]

wow.
this was... *silence*
all i can say is, wow!
you have a way with words, i like :)

thanks for sharing/posting <3

[maudlinsky]

Oh, thank you! Thanks for reading and for your kind words! Both are appreciated greatly. ♥

[countrymir]

well shit...

loved this to pieces, then i loved it to crumbs.

i have a soft spot for fics that are really encompass about a minute or so of time but play them out to make them seem that much longer due to detail. and the concept of the red lights you used, be still my heart. i was flipping tables at it, you used it in a way that had captured me and then some. i can't even really shove into words what i'm trying to say. but the peeks at characterization, and how the setting preludes every other detail is....

i love it all. its so short but its one of those pieces that really makes an imprint in my head.

[maudlinsky]

First off, I love the way you started this comment. It's adorable! loved this to pieces, then i loved it to crumbs. SO CUTE!!

Secondly, thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment. It's really nice, and I am super grateful. Don't worry about shoving words at me, I think that verbosity and eloquence chop up something that could be really sweet.

By the way, your userpic is amazing! ♥ TAEIL ♥ Thanks again, so much!

[countrymir]

HOLD THE PHONE. just saw that you put bsb as music. you're obviously a cool kitten.

and then, :3 i hadn't noticed your name in the comm so i'm guessing you're relatively new to writing in the fandom (although i've been on hiatus for a month so unless you've been posting nonstop since a few minutes ago, i doubt i'd remember anything, sigh) and i love reading authors i don't know. fandom is full of hidden gem writers and i'm determined to be a creep and have read it all.

but your writing style is really lovely and ugh, i'm such a whore for semicolons. you have no idea how i wibbled in joy when i saw a whole five were included in here. simple pleasures, sigh

[maudlinsky]

I LOVE the Backstreet Boys. I swear I told everyone I know when Kevin decided to come back. I sort of grew up with them, I guess. And "Drowning" is one of the most beautiful love songs ever.

I am a newbie. So I'm drinking comments up like kittens do with milk. You write?! I like to read new authors, too. It's kind of cool to see what others are doing.

I am such a comma whore. I was worried that I had too many, thus the semicolons. They are so useful, and I will never understand why no one uses them in writing when one uses them in speaking. It's insanity.

[countrymir]

WHOA WHOA... kevin came back?! i hadn't heard about that. flipping tables right now tbh. ;-; my childhood. i was so sad i never got to go to their last concert ;-; horrible work. they need to do one now that they're together... and do a lot of their older songs fml

:3 bah, you'll get used to comments soon enough dearie. as long as you write for yourself and don't do only for comments. i haven't written in a bit :/ i take lots of breaks lol. the only time i was a frequent writer was ages ago lulz

comma whore... you are my soulmate odg

[maudlinsky]

Yeah, I read somewhere that Kevin came back. I think they're going to keep touring with New Kids On The Block, so maybe you'll get to see them. I want to so badly.

I don't think I'll ever get used to comments, but I enjoy writing. I wouldn't even begin to know what someone else would want from me. Most of the time I don't even know what I want. I think it's good to take breaks, though. It's all about making something special, not making something soon. I really liked what I have read of yours, by the way.

Yes, with our powers combined, we will destroy boring chops of sentences and unite clauses for the greater good! ^_^

[youniqorn]

;_________; ♥

Help comes in many forms; his appears as a normal four-way stop with bumper to bumper traffic. As Jaehyo's hand tilts Kyung's head up, bringing their lips closer, Kyung finally discovers the appeal of taking his time.
I adore this.

This entire piece was lovely and beautiful. It was so well paced, and I found myself reading it slowly, savouring every word and tiny detail, and when I got to the last line, it was like the end of some beautiful violin piece where the final note quietens and lingers in the air after and. Well. Here I am waxing poetic at you!

Thank you so, so, so much for this! ♥

[maudlinsky]

Wow! Look how big that heart is! It makes me all giddy inside, so thank you. ^_^

Thanks for the quoteback, glad you adore it. I adore the poetry of this comment. It's lovely!

No need for thanks, my dear. However, you are welcome. I promised JaeKyung, and I was just hoping this would be good enough. When I started I wasn't sure, but I really like this pairing now. I don't know whether to be happy or not, but they are so cute!

Thanks again! ♥

[remplissant]

I cannot believe you waited until I was gone to post this. Now I feel terrible because I didn't know this was posted and had no way of offering you all my love. This is my favorite pairing, remember, and I just adored this to pieces! Let me flail later, though ;;;; I have to babysit in less than an hour and I am tired.

Also, 'sup, traffic lights don't change themselves of course not, silly! You blow at the red lights and they flicker to green. I saw it once upon a time in a movie :) ♥

[maudlinsky]

Well, am I supposed to wait on you forever? Technically, though, I didn't wait until you were gone. I finished it and posted it. You being gone was out of my control.

Sidebar: What is up with your userpic? Jaehyo is doing girl cute poses, and Taeil is like the King of Siam where no head shall be higher. I think Minhyuk is either trying to inhale all of Jiho's life force or make out with him. Anyway, that aside, it's cute!

I knew you would know all about how to change traffic lights. Now that makes three people that have the power (not B.A.P.): Corrina, you, and Jaehyo. Good company, dude.

Thanks for reading! I thought you should know that the title and the changing of the lights were inspired by one of our amazing adventures...so thank you!

[remplissant]

You knew I was awaaaay, though! Thus, all of this is your fault! I am glad you finished it!

1) Jaehyo is pretty, ok, so he can do these poses; 2) Taeil is the man; 3) Minhyuk is sucking out Jiho's life force because he's a serious mysterious groob speshur alien robot 8| Thanks, I do think it's a rather cute pic of them!

lol, I cannot believe you based this off of me being dorky. Ofc, if it translates into fic so good, well. I suppose I will continue being how I am so that you can be even more ~inspired~ ♥ Thanks!

Your song choice was also very excellent. I approve of the 'ship, the music, and the fic! A+ ♥

And the last line is, like, fjdklsj;fsdklafjsdklfj;slsdfklafj indescribably amazing!

[maudlinsky]

I did know you were away; you have me there. However, I'm not the one who told you to run away for the weekend.

Jaehyo is pretty, Taeil is the man, and Minhyuk is something that I haven't quite figured out yet. But I think he's a cyborg, which is some sort of robot if I remember correctly. That's pretty cool. I need a cute BB userpic, too. I wish I could find one of Jiho giving me that look, you know the look. It's by far the greatest thing he's ever done, besides singing IU hits karaoke-style.

Well, it's true whether you believe it or nor. I doubt you could change if you wanted to, but that's okay. It always leads to great adventures. Sometimes I feel like Christopher Robin with you. ^_^

I'm glad you enjoyed everything! And an A+! How cool is that! Thanks so much.

The last line of your comment is hard to say...I just wanted to say something, too.