Comments | maul_metal: Holy crap, I actually wrote a new poem.

maul_metal

Holy crap, I actually wrote a new poem.

Jul 28, 2005 16:26

She sits alone in her room ( Read more... )

Comments 4

brownstudy July 29 2005, 02:15:12 UTC

I like it, though the tear is a little too emo for me. I like the first stanza and the fifth stanza the best.

What inspired this?

maul_metal July 29 2005, 04:49:05 UTC

well that's the thing. if you didn't have any friends, you'd probably be cryin too, don't ya think? but this was inspired simply by the thoughts that run through my head when i ride around at night with my friends.

brownstudy July 29 2005, 12:54:40 UTC

That's very true. Or maybe I'd go crazy like that movie May (which I think you'd love, if you haven't seen it).

Random inspiration is the best. Last night I had an idea that I was very happy with at about 3 AM.

xstuckxonxyux August 7 2005, 17:06:17 UTC

wow. that poem was amazing. keep up the good work hess.