Comments | maxegirl1313: Will This Not End 1/1

maxegirl1313

Will This Not End 1/1

Oct 10, 2010 22:34

A/N: So, yeah. I wrote a Supernatural fic. I have lots of ideas for this fandom, but I am way too afraid of OOC for the boys. My questionable grammar and odd sentence structure is exactly how I talk, lolwhoops.
I consider this both gen and Sam/Gabriel pre-slash. Is that allowed? Anyway, I had an earth-shattering revelation about Gabriel/Trickster ( Read more... )

supernatural, sam/gabriel, gen

Comments 12

ladyeternal October 11 2010, 03:36:58 UTC

Not bad for a first. One thing you want to correct, though: your spoilers are not just through Mystery Spot. The big reveal of the Trickster being Gabriel is Changing Channels, which is ep 5x8, and you refer to canon events up to that point. So your spoiler warning should be for canon up to Changing Channels.

Other than that, it's a nice little character piece for Gabriel's motivations during Mystery Spot and didn't feel OOC at all. The bit about Gabriel taking care of Sam by resetting his physical state because depression kept him from eating or showering or other personal care was a subtle but effective touch, especially if you want to convey pre-slash.

^_^

In which I fail at replying maxegirl1313 November 22 2010, 23:41:03 UTC

Thanks very much! I appreciate the correction; changed my spoiler!fail.

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In which I punch LJ notifications in the face. maxegirl1313 November 22 2010, 23:41:45 UTC

Thank you very much!

syrul October 11 2010, 04:40:41 UTC

I'm a sucker for Mystery Spot Sam/Gabriel fics, and I really like this. Especially with Gabriel trying to stay neutral while trying to help Sam. ^^

In which I am so sorry for laye!fail!reply maxegirl1313 November 22 2010, 23:42:55 UTC

Thank you!

I very much see (or at least saw) Gabriel as a chaotic nuetral.

Re: In which I am so sorry for laye!fail!reply syrul November 22 2010, 23:52:03 UTC

I absolutely suck at responding to messages/comments on time, so don't worry about it. :) You're welcome, btw.

One of the best parts about how Gabriel was handled was that they kept him chaotic neutral, even in Hammer of the Gods. That's part of the reason he's such an awesome character.

la_mariane October 11 2010, 10:00:40 UTC

Very nice fic, and I liked Gabriel's point of view.

In which I am a horrible, late person. maxegirl1313 November 22 2010, 23:44:05 UTC

Thanks!

I can honestly say I never saw myself writing a fic from Gabriel's POV of all things. But I'm very glad it worked for you.

ebilchickens October 12 2010, 05:41:46 UTC

This really fit canon. Thanks for sharing it. :)

In which I strangle LJ notifactions. maxegirl1313 November 22 2010, 23:45:10 UTC

Thank you very much! I appreciate you tsking the time to review!

(On another note, I love your icon <3)