Fic: Unbidden

[shmobeline]

Hello, I'm new here. Haven't read the fourth book yet. I should probably wait until I finish my end of year exams, hehe. Anyhoo, I'm from Australia, so hey hello to any fellow Aussies.

I come bearing fan fiction. No dilly-dallying around from me :D

Title: Unbidden
Characters: The flock; Fax.
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: approx. 650 words.
Disclaimer:

Comments

[amor_demi_alma]

Lol! So dang believable!!! Love it!
Just FYI, right before she sticks her elbow between his legs, you accidentally said "I" when you shouldn't have (i.e., switched perspectives/persons). Not to be a jerk. Just thought I'd let you know. But other than that it was totally stinkin' perfect! :D And funny, too!
Great!

[shmobeline]

Oh, oops! Thanks! Aren't bizarre perspective switches fun? :P

I'm glad you liked it! *Grins*.

[amor_demi_alma]

Hahha I do the exact same thing -- perspective switch slip-ups. Sometimes they can be very incriminating. :D
Loved your fic; you should definitely write more. Great job!

[shmobeline]

Lol, agreed on the incriminating part. I will definitely write, I just don't know when. My muse and my mood-for-writing don't play very nicely together. It's hard to get them to co-operate, heh.

[munesanzun_koi]

That is toooooo sexy. And very realistic, as far as "deleted scenes" go. I definitely want to read more of your work~

[shmobeline]

Hehe, thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I haven't put any other Max Ride fics up on the 'net yet, but when I do I'll post them here as well, so never you worry. Thanks again!

[utkari02]

This was lovely!!! :D Thanks for sharing. :)

[shmobeline]

No worries. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

[borntobewild13]

Gahahahhahah, evil evil, I say...I enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing!

[shmobeline]

Haha. Yeah, I had fun writing it. Poor old Fang. He can't help being a teenaged boy. :P I'm glad you liked it!