FIC: Body Languange (complete)

[maxine_chan]

I HAVE FIIIIIIC. OP fic. >.> First time writing it, haha. Actually it's not even really FIC, because it's super short. So. Ficlet. Huzzah. ENJOY!

Title: Body Language
Fandom: One Piece
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Zoro/Sanji, with commentary by Usopp and Franky :|
Length: 1,200 words
Disclaimer: Not mine! Don't own it.
Summary: Usopp tries to

Comments

[aliquot]

jfeiowajfweio

[maxine_chan]

alkjsdhfkajs

[aliquot]

OUR KEYSMASHES MATCH SO WELL ;____; ITS BEAUTIFUL.

[danbi]

MAXIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.

You have no idea how I smiled to see you'd posted these! I know I'm not yet fully caught up to appreciate all the characters but it was still hilarious as fuck to read. The first one was SO GREAT. I am naturally averse to Franky [you can blame Steph for that one] as of now but he was GOOD TIMES. And...that part was so sweet, with their hands brushing. Awwwwwwwwww. LUFFY WAS ALSO AMAZING. [Hey, you put him in the fic. I HAVE to comment on him. And his gaming ideas. >.>]

The second one was great, too. This line made me stop reading because I was laughing too hard:

Nami-san is so beautiful when she’s telling me to get lost~!! ♥

HAHHAHAHAHA. I can't wait to see more of Sanji.

In other words, YOU WRITE EXCELLENTLY and it was V. V. NICE to see some of your writing again. :D

[maxine_chan]

BRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII.

Ahahahaha, I'm glad you liked it even without knowing who everyone is yet!!! Franky is amazing, you'll see. And hot. :| In his speedos. :||| LUFFY IS JUST AWESOME BY DEFAULT. You could write a line that was just: "Luffy was hanging out in the background, picking his nose sexily" and he would still be amazing, HAHA.

lkajshfasdf hahahaha not gonna lie, I amused myself with that line. >.> SO I AM HAPPY IT MADE YOU LAUGH!

YOU WITH YOUR LONG COMMENTS - you are always too good to me, Bri!!! THANK YOU!!!!! <333

[danbi]

Well, I'm familiar with what they look like. ...If you say so. HAHAHA THAT'S SO TRUE. < bias >< bias >< bias >< bias >< bias >< bias >There's pretty much NO END to how great Luffy is.< /bias> :|| [Hey, at least I closed ONE tag.]

Excellent! Most lines in the fic made me laugh, that one is just the one that made me have to pause because I was too busy cracking up to look at my screen.

You're welcome! I was so thrilled to see fic by you. :D

[mousapelli]

YESSSSSSSSSSSS

SO MUCH LOVE YES

They really do like pet names. I'm up in the early 70s, where Sanji and Zoro over whose lizard is the biggest/fattest/has the most meat. GLORIOUS.

And I love Chopper and Luffy like always XD and new people! i can't wait to get to them! although I have questions like "how many people can really fit on this boat" and "how can I make vivian come back?"

*flails*

[maxine_chan]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA, THE BATTLE FOR THE BIGGEST DINOSAUR. Phallic symbolism WHAT. :||| I love that part so much, hahahahaaaa.

I'm glad you liked them!! All your questions will be answered as you KEEP WATCHING. One of the later arcs is absolutely AMAZING, I'm excited for you to get there! :D

THAAAANK YOU!!!!!

[jazzyjello]

Asdklaskld that was only the greatest thing ever. XDXD I cracked up the whole time. Your Usopp voice is perfect - I love what he calls Zoro's weights for example. HAHAHA he is such a voyeur. Franky was hilarious. Luffy and Chopper were great and OF COURSE Zoro and Sanji were.

*____*

[maxine_chan]

Ahahahaha, THANK YOU JAZ!!!!! I had so much fun writing them all. alkjsdhfs. OH ONE PIECE. YOU GIVE ME SO MUCH JOOOOY!!! *__*

[astrokender]

SUPER!

[maxine_chan]

THANK YOU!!