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Fic: Nothing Else Matters

Mar 09, 2010 11:37

Title: Nothing Else Matters
Author: Maxinegray
Characters: Mohinder, Sylar
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Sex.
Summary: The destruction of Gabriel, of everything he used to be, is done in 10 steps. (The 10 Commandments). Following the path of season 1 to season 2 and AU from there.
Word Count: 1,230
A/N: It's about time I've posted something. Here's to ( Read more... )

heroes, fic, mohinder, sylar, mylar

Comments 7

angary March 10 2010, 03:18:22 UTC

Ooh, I like this! The short, clipped narrative worked really well here, and that you put the sins as headers for each section was a nice touch. And this:

The devil burns deep inside him, consuming like fire and darkness...

is a fantastic line.

I also thought it was awesome - and kind of amusing - that you included the scene of Mohinder gazing in awe at the bullet while Sylar is like "'Kay... I'm just gonna... go now..." and glaring at Mohinder like he's insulted that Mo was more interested in the bullet than him. Oh, Sylar XD

Great job!

mabetini March 11 2010, 21:01:27 UTC

You know how I feel about this fic! I love it so much! I think
Keep The Sabbath Holy is my favorite part, because its gorgeous. I can see it playing out, and the marriage between Sylar's need for guidance and his feral urges are absolutely perfect through the entire thing. It almost reads like a poem! Thank you for letting me be the first person to lay eyes on it <33333 I LOVE YOU!