[FANFIC] Stars That Come Out (In The Morning)

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Pairing: Jonghyun/Onew
Rating: R
Genre: Angst, Angst and more Angst.
Summary: He was the reality Jonghyun always wanted.

Comments

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Miwi

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*weeping* this is like the most amazing thing ever. I do not lie. I LOVE this fic. Like seriously I love it. I guess it just speaks to me :/ and omg it is sheer utter brilliance. I want to like give a million gold stars or mount it on a pedestal.

fdjdlsf *weeping* I feel like rereading it :/ because wow it's just so amazing. :/ dfjdsklfjdsfj I'm sorry I feel like I am failing at conveying my feelings. But I really do adore this.

I love you (and hey I got first spot ;_;) like seriously. It's written so well and it conveys all the emotions (I think) really well.

Bb I think your muse is back. XD And I will shut up now and stop gushing. But I kind of feel like reccing this to everyone on my flist. I wish I wrote this well. ^^;
♥♥♥

(and no I don't want to curse you, more like put you up on a pedestal and worship you ^^;)

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Miwiiii thank you, you precious mother of my virtual babies, you~ Of course I had to give you the first spot you were the first person i told, about this JongYu and about how my shinee muse was slipping away from me T_T

don't worship, that's lame D:

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♥ heeee :D no problem bb~ :D awww your SHINee muse is never slipping away from you, you precious thing :D

well ;__; I truly adore and love love love this ♥ :D it's amazing and I love how you left it open ended :D

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Heaven & Lyssie (if you guys want ^_^)

[hahappyness]

Of course I want!

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FML FML FML FML FML

I TRIED COMMENTING ON YOUR FIC like 2i3472938 TIMES. OMGGG I HATE MY SCHOOLS INTERNET CONNECTION.

AHSKFJDLSKD I FEEL LIKE CRYING BECAUSE ALL THE PREVIOUS COMMENTS WERE ALL LIIKE AWESOME AND STUFF EXPRESSING MY LOVE FOR YOUR FIC BUT NOPE MY SCHOOLS LAME INTERNET HAD TO BE A BIPOLAR BITCH.

... after school i'll fosho leave a better comment.

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;AAAAAAAAAAAAAA; STABS YOUR SCHOOL'S INTERNET

OMG YOU PRECIOUS THING I LOVE YOU SO MUCH, GOOD THING I AM MARRYING YOU, WHEW.

TAKE YOUR TIME BOO, THIS FIC ISNT GOING ANYWHERE, I PROMISE.

BUT NOPE MY SCHOOLS LAME INTERNET HAD TO BE A BIPOLAR BITCH. LMAOOO AT THIS xD

spotttttt

[pikasu]

hohoho

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holds Jinki close, breathes in his scent, the feeling of having his heart thump to the beat of Jinki’s drives him delirious, Jinki’s real he tells himself; Jinki’s better than everything else

Nonononononono “Totally.” LOL i found this pretty funny xD

“What, do you have a crush on me?” Jonghyun snaps, when he gets irked by Minho’s stare.

“No, but you have one on Jinki Hyung.” Minho shrugs and leaves the room.

He thinks either he’s way too obvious or Minho does really think and observe like he states he does.

He feels his eyelids closing, he wants to sleep, he’s tired; he pulls the blanket closer, lulls himself into sleep and he dreams.

Dreams of music, dreams of a better tomorrow, dreams of Jinki.

Dreams of stars in the morning.

I CAN SEE WHAT YOU MEAN BY JJONG BEING EMO AND JINKI BEING JINKI BUT-
HDU THAT WAS GOOOOOOOD OKAY, GOOD ;---;
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

/drowns you in hearts

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I laughed when I wrote that line, irony!

SEEE JONGHYUN WAS BEING SO DIFFICULT AND JINKI, OBLIVIOUS /COMPLAINS

SOBBLES THANK YOUUUUUUUUU

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/drowning

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... wow. this took my breath away. it was moving and lovely and realistic and never overdone. poor jonghyun!

i really liked the run on sentences at the start, i thought it gave the fic intensity ande depth. your characterization of jonghyun is fascinating, and i thought you wrote his passion for music and spiral into self-hurt really well.

sings like it’s the last song, sings like there is no tomorrow

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this took my breath away SOBBING you spoil me, really. But thank you for the comment, I am glad you liked it. Have you heard Jonghyun's Hyeya? It's his solo song, that inspired me I don't exactly know why. I know Jonghyun is a happy guy in RL but, something about a dark Jonghyun makes him a great topic to write on.

and thank you for ending it on a hopeful note. I couldn't help myself, I don't like angst all that much

Thank you ^___^♥

[chun_ji]

not yet, imma check it out c:
i can believe jonghyun would be prone to being emotional sometimes though, since he's so passionate :3

ahaha, we're such suckers for happy endings ;; yw! ♥

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Oh please do, it's a lovely song and Jonghyun's voice is ugh /obvious bias/
He is, he's an adorable little baby. sdfjhsdfjhsfhsdfd i need to stop fangirling him like that~

totally /brofist ♥

[nikcuf]

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ilu

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omg, that face~!

♥

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that screams WAE.

♥ ♥ ♥

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:( This says sorry

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