Comments | maxism12: [FANFIC] Stars That Come Out (In The Morning)

maxism12

[FANFIC] Stars That Come Out (In The Morning)

May 15, 2011 15:24

Pairing: Jonghyun/Onew
Rating: R
Genre: Angst, Angst and more Angst.
Summary: He was the reality Jonghyun always wanted.

( “Dreams )

rating: r, !fanfiction, #fandom:shinee, pairing:onew/jonghyun, genre:angst

Comments 59

jinkibumiminho May 16 2011, 04:22:08 UTC

A little angst is good once in a while. This was lovely. I don't see Jonghyun as a cutter, but the whole self-destructive theme was really fitting. Good story!

maxism12 May 16 2011, 16:19:35 UTC

;__________; I don't see him as a cutter either, but it's more like he's trying to distract himself, dunno if that made sense.

But thank you for commenting♥

ext_539464 May 16 2011, 06:45:09 UTC

This is awesome xD
Is it only a one-shot cuz I think you could make a sequel... I wanna see some more jonghyun and onew action xD

maxism12 May 16 2011, 16:21:26 UTC

Thank you ♥

I m sorry, this is more of a one shot :)

cutielovergirl May 16 2011, 08:04:09 UTC

This... really is too beautiful.

It hurts to see Jjong being emo and despairing and suicidal and and and... ;A;
But yeah, I can understand a bit of it (or so I think...)

Jinki reminds him of a bright day, a new tomorrow; a new tomorrow he isn’t sure he can have; Jinki is like a breathe of fresh air that he so desperately in need of.
I really, really love how Jinki always comes with soft, gentle warmth and brightful sunshine... Oh srsly, Jjong should really have just confessed already!!!

I don't know... This is supposedly implying happy ending, right?? Still, this is heart-breakingly beautiful ♥

Are U gon' do a sequel for this? Just askin' :D

yuki12341234 May 16 2011, 10:30:29 UTC

LOL our icons

cutielovergirl May 16 2011, 10:33:16 UTC

LOLLLLLLL Dis iz so cool xD

maxism12 May 16 2011, 16:23:23 UTC

Thank you♥

Jinki is like that =) Warm and cuddly.

Thank you very much ♥

yuki12341234 May 16 2011, 10:29:09 UTC

jonghyunnnnn ;-;
please write happy jongyu♥

maxism12 May 16 2011, 16:24:28 UTC

;__________;

I sure will♥

Thank you for your comment :)

crystalshawol May 16 2011, 12:46:18 UTC

I don't want to call this beautiful because you can't really label what this is as beautiful but for some reason I that word came to mind perhaps not for what is actually going on in the fic but for how if makes you feel when you read it. Yes perhaps that is where it is coming from. Because while you read the longing and how lost Jjong is your heart cries for him because you just want him to grab onto his bit of happiness he wants so desperately. and even though you might not have meant it for the reader to think this I like to think that Jinki probably figured it out that even if he doesn't love him that way or maybe even if he does that in the end in his own way he give the smallest piece of his comfort that he can without overwhelming Jjong because I think that If Jinki gave him too much too soon that it would end up hurting Jjong. What he did was perfect (even if you didn't mean it to be) I found it perfect.
This was lovely in that emotional sense and I want to sincerely thank you for sharing. ^ ^

maxism12 May 16 2011, 16:34:54 UTC

OH MY GOD, YOUR COMMENT ♥

Because while you read the longing and how lost Jjong is your heart cries for him because you just want him to grab onto his bit of happiness he wants so desperately

That's exactly how Jonghyun feels, I am glad you understood, I love how you have interpreted this, and I completely agree with it. This is more like Jonghyun justs wants to be happy, nothing more and he seeks that happiness through Onew. Thank you so much for this, you made my day ♥