Bittersweet Aftertaste

[may_song]

Title: Bittersweet Aftertaste
Genre : Angst
Rating: PG-13
Length: One Shot
Pairing: Jaeho with some Min (not in the way you think)
Author's Note:  I wrote this a little while back, in between muse and lack of it, but here it is, I hope the concept of it is understood and stuff....Line break is very important! *poet in rage*

Sometimes you give him your

Comments

[kroongho]

/wrist
*heartbreak*

I... ;_; sequel, please?

[may_song]

nyu! nyu slashing wrist! *gives you a band aid* =[

I apologize for the heartbreak...I will think about a sequel! But I really never thought about one...

[beautyinsleep]

First off, this was very aptly titled.

I loved it--JaeJoong's emotions seemed so real--even if it did break my heart. The parallel formatting and second person narration only added to the awesome. ♥

While it's beautiful as it is, I can't help but also ask for a (perhaps happier?) sequel.

[may_song]

Thank you so much for your thoughts on this ficcie. I truly, truly appreciate comments about the writing structure. *bows*

And the title! ^-^ Yay, someone approves of a title I made.

I will consider making a sequel, a happier one for sure. ^-^

[beautyinsleep]

I think the writing structure is one of the most important things in a fic, so I'm always impressed when someone goes beyond the norm! I'll be looking forward to the sequel if you decide to write it! :D

Do you mind if I add you? ^^

[may_song]

^____^ thanks again! lol

You just made my entire day.

And I would love to have ya add me! =] *bow bow*

a new friend! =]

[anonymous]

Brilliant, beautiful, captivating.

You've not lost your grasp at all. There was never a moment I felt the need to skim because it drew in my attention with every word. When I got to the end, I wanted it to go on.

I love your use of line breaks in this piece. They grab the reader and force them to delve deeper into the meaning.

Write on, dear.
Write on.

[may_song]

When you compliment me, I feel like I can take on a board of of English scholars. lol

Thanks!

[lollyribena]

So. Melancholic. This tugs my heart string oh so badly. I haven't in a long time read something like this. Light, but at the same time, cold bitterness deep inside.

I want moar of this, please? Probably a sequel?

[lollyribena]

Andd, can I add you please?

[may_song]

Of course you can add me! =D

Thank you reading and I'm so glad that I could give ya a good read.

*goes to add youuuu*

[chloe1910]

Ouch..that was painful, damn painful.
Poor Jaejoong *huggleshimtight*

*smacked myself for continuously reading angsty fic*

[may_song]

Oh he's going to endure much more pain. *angst addict*

Thank you for reading and commenting. ^^