Motion Sickness

Oct 04, 2008 05:01

Title: Motion Sickness
Genre: Angst
Rating: PG-15
Length: Chapter Story
Pairing: JaeMin

Synopsis:

It's been over a year since the fatal car accident that left two dead and Changmin soulless. But what better way to find your drive to live than to simply take a drive with the one you lived to love?

Chapter II )

chapter story, dbsk

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kannuki_neru October 4 2008, 12:29:46 UTC
I don't understand much as of yet but I'm enjoying the.. um, drive! xD

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may_song October 4 2008, 12:37:09 UTC
well, good morning! ^^

I'll explain it as much as I can without giving out the real idea behind it all.

Minnie was driving, speeding, and he got into a huge car accident that killed the person in the passenger seat and he also killed the person who was in the other car.

He hasn't touched a car in a year and doesn't want to (the whole "I don't want to drive" thing is a metaphor for him not having a drive in life) go near one. Until he sees his baby all brand spanking new. And so, he's now curious and unsure if he can get behind the wheel again.

=] The next chapter will be much clearer. And the sexy Jae will make a huge appearance. ^^

Hope that helped! Thanks for the comment!

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may_song October 4 2008, 12:49:04 UTC
blah, I should add that the whole part of him thinking he's in a car and racing down the street, is a memory of the night he had the crash. He took the red light. *nod nod*

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kannuki_neru October 4 2008, 21:58:25 UTC
That much I figured out xDDD I mean that I want to know MORE about what happened ;) Sorry for not being clear ^^ Anyway I'm looking forward to the next part :D

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emda October 4 2008, 15:20:04 UTC
interesting

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may_song October 4 2008, 17:27:43 UTC
I hope it is lol. It's extremely difficult to make something so trivial like driving be the foundation of a story.

Thank you for the comment.

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chloe1910 October 4 2008, 18:03:50 UTC
Poor CHangmin, He still has not gotten over the accident. I wonder what actually happened...

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may_song October 4 2008, 18:37:08 UTC
Thank you for reading, Chloe. And for commenting, of course. :]
I promise to (try to ) write him a nice little bit of happiness in here.

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chloe1910 October 5 2008, 04:41:47 UTC
Ah...Please do..Min is rather pitiful here..

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jun_4_ever October 5 2008, 00:25:23 UTC
wahhhhhhhh this story keeps getting better and better. keep up the good work

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may_song October 5 2008, 06:35:19 UTC
Thank you! ^_^

I love your icon btw lol

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mcgrjc6 October 5 2008, 03:26:28 UTC
Oh this is really deep! I'm kinda confused, but more curious than anything. I really really really want to know what happened now!

and omg this line was just beautiful!:
He stared skywards, meeting the ceiling instead, but he preferred it that way, and let his mind wander in limited square feet because anything outside of that was unwanted by him.

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may_song October 5 2008, 06:36:13 UTC
So glad that you're curious! =] Glad I could keep ya entertained. :D

And wow...I am quite proud of that line now lol.
:] *blush* Thank you for commenting.

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