Letalis

[mayalioness]

Title: Letalis
Author: LionessAmaya (MayaLioness)
Rating: PG
Pairing: Implied, unrequited Jack x Doctor (10th) and mentions of Master x Doctor
Summary: The Doctor doesn't trust, and Jack can understand, even if he doesn't like it. Drabble.
Word Count: 209
Genre: Friendship, hurt/ comfort, slight romance
Warning: Mentions and implications of slash

Comments

[yamx]

This is heartbreaking and rings very true for these two. Well done.

[mayalioness]

Thank you so much!

[nightrider101]

Wow. This was haunting and so sad. It definitely rings true, though.

I loved the last line. :) I'm a sucker for those one liners that feel like a sucker punch to the gut.

Thanks for sharing!

[mayalioness]

Thank you! I was going for realistic... one of these days I'll write about the Doctor randomly abandoning all of his reservations and making out with Jack, but that'll be a long time from now.
Last lines are _always_ my favourite part to write, if it's a drabble. Sometimes I'll spend ten or twenty minutes thinking of the perfect one. XD Thanks again for commenting!

[ana_rpm]

Oh, very nice. Poor Jack. Poor Doctor.
Thanks for sharing.

[mayalioness]

Thanks so much! ^.^ Is it wrong that I love angsty slash so much?

[ana_rpm]

Not at all! I love it too. ;)

[mayalioness]

What the hell is "unscreen to reply"?
Anyway, that's good, because it's my comfort food. ^.^ XD

Amazing

[frocked11]

It was poetic and heartfelt. Was it bad that I loved how amazingly sad it was? I hope not. Good job.

Re: Amazing

[mayalioness]

Thanks Andy!! I'm glad you liked it. ^.^ Of course it isn't bad! In fact, it makes me incredibly happy. Thanks again!

[samueljames]

Dark but believable and well written.

[mayalioness]

Thank you!! I'm very glad you think so. =]