The Longest Road - Salvation Verse

Jan 12, 2010 18:37

I had a sad. I don't think this is.

SPN -- Salvation FutureVerse - Gen.

takes place Post - Time's a Comin.
The longest Road )

8th's salvation, spn_fic

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gekizetsu January 13 2010, 03:13:59 UTC
Oh, my god.

That felt so good. <3<3 You always nail things dead center.

Makes me want to write more in this 'verse.

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maygra January 14 2010, 17:17:50 UTC
Please *do*... but thank you. Yeah, I miss them.

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superwicked January 13 2010, 06:35:54 UTC
Oh wow! So much love for this verse!

And I couldn't help but smile while I read this The sudden sharp bark of her uncle's laughter, the slow build of her father's, and that let her memory supply the way he'd smile into his laughter, like he was building up to it. Uncle Dean just dived right into it - the way he'd dived into most things. But her father: those bursts of laughter were rare; always the smile first, the wonder and amusement rolling over each other building toward a laugh.. and the tears were rolling down my cheeks after this Her father's laughter had always been the rare thing -- not the smile or the affection or the soft spoken voice in her ear, but the laughter.

This is so perfect, the way you captured all the feelings and emotions!
♥♥♥

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maygra January 14 2010, 17:18:14 UTC
Aw, thank you so much!

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girlguidejones January 13 2010, 07:42:24 UTC
How Sam's laugh begins and builds...that, and how Dean just guffaws...was lovely and perfectly them.

Love this!

(And you!)

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maygra January 14 2010, 17:18:47 UTC
snugs. Thank you.

I want them to keep talking to me.

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elusive_life_77 January 13 2010, 15:36:56 UTC
Hiya Maygra!!!

This was lovely. An immersion into the senses with someone who loves them and misses them dearly. It both hurts and feels exactly right that the car, their home for so much of their lives, would stand as memorial to them.

aaaaand now I need to go back and start the Salvation 'verse over again to refresh my memory of it...which is never a bad thing!

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maygra January 14 2010, 17:19:24 UTC
Aw, Thank you so much, elu! I'm glad you liked it. and yeah, I've been rereading to. Still a happy place.

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rynnalyn January 13 2010, 16:47:15 UTC
Oh, how easy it is to slip right back in and love these people and feel the loss. This was gorgeous and lovely.

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maygra January 14 2010, 17:20:26 UTC
Thank you so much, Rynn. I'm glad you liked it.

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