Ifs & Maybes

May 02, 2006 19:59

It was all Mal did anymore. In his free time of course, which seemed to be more frequent as of late. Seemed he didn’t have any desire to do anything other than think of what might have been. He fingered the capture gingerly as another finger gently traced over the Companion’s face as she went about packing up her sundries.

He was startled when ( Read more... )

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browncoat_2x2 May 3 2006, 01:36:26 UTC
ooh, Nice!

I love Wash's sing-songy voice! And Mal contemplating all the things that might have been if only he'd asked her to stay... sigh...

Then the end is hopeful like... thinking on what might be! yay!

Very nice!

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isha_libran May 3 2006, 21:06:51 UTC
Ah, I love how you twisted it around to focus on what might be instead of what might have been--gives the whole piece a much more hopeful air.

Good stuff! =)

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mayorst May 3 2006, 21:10:20 UTC
Aww thank you! You know he *was* wondering that. :-P

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isha_libran May 3 2006, 21:24:07 UTC
I'm sure he was. =)

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ala_me May 4 2006, 23:07:16 UTC
That was so nice and hopeful. You sould continue it:)

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