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[Fic] And Now The Story Begins

Jan 16, 2013 18:33

Title: And Now The Story Begins
Pairing: Yunjae
Summary: Jung Yunho served a man who was pale as fresh snow, with hair as dark as night, and pouty red lips. Oh and he had unusually long canines too. But if he was caged within the walls of his master's castle, then he was his willing prisoner.

( “I am exceptionally gifted in convincing people to do things my way; I’m sure you wouldn’t want to know what my methods are.” )

length: oneshot, pairing: yunjae

Comments 46

dulanis January 16 2013, 15:52:03 UTC

This was <3
:D

mb_lucified January 17 2013, 16:01:49 UTC

Thank you for reading and commenting! :D

nosy_duck January 16 2013, 16:26:43 UTC

oh my god, yunho falling in love at the age 11

lol

this is lovely :3

thx for share

mb_lucified January 17 2013, 16:02:54 UTC

Hahaha I was thinking that he was more of... mesmerised by Jaejoong as a child, then slowly grew to love the man as time went by. ^^

Thank you for reading and commenting! I'm glad you liked it. :D

snow_meow January 16 2013, 17:06:10 UTC

LOL
Jaejoong waited 9 years before he made Yunho his?
That is a long wait.

mb_lucified January 17 2013, 16:06:28 UTC

Well vampires have all of eternity to wait, don't they...? *wink wink* Haha I actually wanted him to wait till Yunho was 16 or 18 (and couldn't decide between the two =.=) but ended up with 20 in the end because that is when teenagers come of age in Japan and Korea. I wanted it to look like... Jaejoong was dead (no pun intended) sirius about it, and he wasn't rushing into the decision; and he wanted to wait till Yunho had spent sufficient time with him to know who he really was and what the consequences of being a vampire would entail... he wanted to wait till Yunho was matured enough and could be accountable for his own actions. Lol and let's imagine that Jaejoong is a very patient man. XD

Thank you for reading and commenting! :D (and sorry that this turned into a mini rant! >.<)

wasur3naid3 January 16 2013, 19:32:58 UTC

This is so good!!! :D and fits so well with his image in the MV!
OMGGGGGG!! :D LOVE IT

mb_lucified January 17 2013, 16:07:27 UTC

Thank you! I wrote it even before the teaser was released, so I guess I'm really lucky that he went with a vampire concept for the MV. ^^;; I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

uchie07 January 16 2013, 21:54:56 UTC

cool.. vamp yunjae in a new pov..

mb_lucified January 17 2013, 16:08:42 UTC

New POV? Is it because other fics have Yunho as the vampire instead? ^^;; Jaejoong always seemed more vampir-ish to me, so I went with him.

Thank you for reading and commenting! :D