Comments | mbjar2000: Poetry

mbjar2000

Feb 01, 2006 02:11

Don't be sad, sweet angel ( Read more... )

Comments 8

poso13 February 1 2006, 16:34:19 UTC

I enjoyed reading that! Did you write it?

Brian

mbjar2000 February 2 2006, 00:22:16 UTC

Thanks. Yes, I did write it. Any poetry I post on here is my own, unless otherwise noted.

purple_pixie February 1 2006, 18:26:49 UTC

that is a very good poem.

mbjar2000 February 2 2006, 00:23:48 UTC

thanks amie

ultimatejay February 2 2006, 02:57:11 UTC

Do you think a turnip could defeat a beet in a fight?

Oh, and good stuff.

mbjar2000 February 2 2006, 03:06:59 UTC

Of course a turnip could defeat a beet. The beet is already beaten.

ultimatejay February 2 2006, 03:13:26 UTC

Maybe he's the one beeting!

gabbieb February 3 2006, 17:45:57 UTC

Very good