The stony path of life (7/?)

Oct 25, 2010 21:50



(5 months later)

I never knew you before, I've never seen that sweet smil
Or those eyes that dazzled from about a mile away.
I never smelled that sweet scent that followed you everywhere you went
Or even had the chance to call you mine.

Im sitting in the cafeteria with Teddy. She went on a date yesterday and it seems to me ( Read more... )

fanfic: callie/arizona

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funkyshaz57 October 26 2010, 07:17:22 UTC
Really? Callie's moved on and is in love with Arizona! The way this chapter is written is like she didn't really love Arizona at all! She's all like I'm sorry but I've moved on and i'm in love so yeah too bad type thing lol!

I'm too blue to read more of this there's so much angst it's just too depressing! I think I need to troll the boards for more happier fics lol

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mcawesome1993 October 26 2010, 07:45:40 UTC
I'm sorry for this chapter. And the next one. It wasn't easy to write that. I didn't want to create a picture where Callie doesn't love Arizona at all! :( I should have posted the 9th chapter right away, because then we can see how she really feels. =)

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funkyshaz57 October 26 2010, 10:40:42 UTC
Lol don't apologise for the chapter! It's just not me that's all! I like to be an honest reviewer it's a terrible habbit I have I don't beat around the bush....It did come across as though Callie didn't really give two hoots about Arizona even if she is secretly still in love with her! She left Arizona left the city comes back 5 months later in love with someone else not really caring about Arizona's feelings the supposed love of her life....but i guess that's Callie for you

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mcawesome1993 October 26 2010, 11:43:46 UTC
Well, not really. I like Callie. But I wanted her to kinda build a wall around herself regarding Arizona and her feelings for her! =)

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mcawesome1993 October 26 2010, 11:41:10 UTC
Yeah, I do feel for Arizona ..

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