poem

[snow_k]

Hello every one! sorry it has been so long since I've posted, but here I am with a poem that a wrote. You see, last night I was thinking allot about romance and sadness, so I decided to rite a poem for the young people who are sent off to war

Comments

[sexyrockgoddess]

wow winter your poem is so very very sad, but sweet in a bitter sweet sort of way. Great poem though, i love it.

[mildmannered]

his smile was posed
as if on a stage

THAT is a great line.

[davidd]

I liked, "my eyes melted down/as they closed into his."

It's nice to "see" you here again! Will you be blogging the Comicon experience?

[snow_k]

probably. Con is one of the most fun experiences of the year! ;)

[local_perform]

Dearest Niece, lovely

[jack_mirth]

that's really, really lovely and touching.