I Got My Heart Right Here

[mcinstry]

Title: I Got My Heart Right Here
Rating: M 
Words: 6,622

Summary: “Most people wouldn't be able to forgive what I did. Especially not after everything you went through to get to my full Time Lord self.”

Author's Notes: This is the LONG awaited sequel to  It's Not a Game. A huge thank you goes out to jer832 for helping me out so much with this one. She was

Comments

[julesndairyland]

I really do not know where to begin. Other than to say this is fabulous!

This story is so emotionally real and vulnerable. Your Metacrisis Doctor is so well defined, his struggle for identity so clear. Your depiction of him is so poignant. The need for he and Rose to find their way together is very well depicted. And the sensuality of Rose and the Doctor together was brilliant.

Frankly, I love you writing style, I have a clear mental picture as I read your story. I look forward to reading more of your fic.

[mcinstry]

Awh, thank you!

I wanted them to be desperate in different ways. I'm very glad that came and my imagery came across clearly.

There is more fic to be had. Soon. Hopefully.

Thank you for commenting. :)

[crystal_roes]

*pulls out a big blue lacy fan* This was a lovely treat. I'll definitely need to remember this for when I need some feel good smuffy goodness with some delicious angst stirred in along with a generous portion of beautiful characterization all mixed up in a pot of gorgeous writing talent and left to simmer on high hotness level until perfect for enjoying slowly during the evening with a blanket and sofa and some chocolate for dessert.

That kind of got away from me. Fantastic work!