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Beat Your Heart Out 5/?

Jul 07, 2009 09:46

Title: Beat Your Heart Out 5/?
Author: mcortho
Rating: PG right now. Later chapters possibly R
Pairing: Callie/Erica, Callie/Arizona
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callie/arizona, callie/erica

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flowdeborah July 8 2009, 01:30:03 UTC

Oh PLEASE!
I need you to update this soon!
Looks like Callie is going to pull up her "big girl" pants and finally love Erica openly and I want it to happen soon, so............please.

mcortho July 8 2009, 02:46:04 UTC

I will definitley try to update really soon, promise! I think its about time Callie finally admits to Erica that she loves her, and trust me she will =]
Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

huffm004 July 8 2009, 03:23:10 UTC

yay!! cant wait for an update

mcortho July 8 2009, 04:18:33 UTC

Hopefully I'll have the next update soon =]
Thanks for reading and commenting =]

nienna_lilith July 8 2009, 04:43:16 UTC

Woooooooohooooo!!!! I'm leaving in one hour: you posted before it! thank you!!
""I love Erica." Its the first time I'm saying it out loud. The only problem is, I'm saying it to the wrong person." Grat line!!!!
Now tha Callie said it out loud I can wait for these long 10 days...
As soon as I'll be back in town I'll check for updates.
Thank you very very much!

mcortho July 8 2009, 04:53:42 UTC

I felt bad about leaving everyone with that upsetting cliffhanger in the last part. I had to fix it! Callie saying she loves Erica out loud is a huge step.
The reason this chapter got up so quickly was because I didn't want to leave you hanging before you had to leave =]
Glad you enjoyed it and thanks so much for commenting!

nienna_lilith July 8 2009, 05:02:46 UTC

"The reason this chapter got up so quickly was because I didn't want to leave you hanging before you had to leave =]"
You are so sweeeeet!!!!
Thank you! :-)))

hottielibrarian July 8 2009, 04:55:45 UTC

AWESOME!!! God, I loved this! I so love that Callie still gets butterflies over Erica. And you're so right--Erica never gave Callie a reason to doubt her and she was always chasing after Callie, she always loved Callie, at least that's what I always saw. Thank you SO MUCH for writing and sharing this! I can't wait to see what happens!!

mcortho July 8 2009, 05:14:07 UTC

Thank you so much for the amazing comment!
I saw the chemistry that Callica had as well. I'm trying to fix the mess they left us with.
Next update should be up soon =]

sapphicwarrior July 8 2009, 17:12:34 UTC

I turn and begin to run away. I'm running towards Erica this time, not away. I hear Mark's voice as I head down the hall, "Go get your girl Torres!"
Go Callie go :)
Really looking forward to the next part :)

mcortho July 8 2009, 18:15:59 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad everyone liked that line.
Next part should be up soon =]