Concrit?

[ex_sabotage]

Title: Pompeii
Author: sabotaged
Rating: R
Pairing: Gerard/Frank
Word Count: 1,202
Summary: You always hurt the ones you love most, whether intentional or not.
Disclaimer: This is fiction.
Author's Note: It would be incredibly wonderful if you could take a moment and listen to Say Something, by LAPUSH which can be found here at their Purevolume page.

Comments

[shira]

Wow. This was beautiful. And really so well done. I had a feeling it was going to be something like this after reading your summary, but by the beginning of the story I wasn't so sure anymore. Either way, very deep and very heart-wrenching. Nice work!

[ex_sabotage]

Wow thank you, that's a really nice compliment, and I sort of hate when the warnings give me away :p

[shira]

It did at first, but then like I said, as I started reading, I was doubting that was what it was about, lol. Loved it.

[liesthatwebleed]

Oh this is written so well. I was trying to think of concrit, but I really can't. It's really lovely. It's pretty easy to understand, even with all the symbolism.

[ex_sabotage]

Thank you so very much, it really means a lot that you said that.

[crossbow1]

I loved this story. The only problem with it is that there are so many Frank/Gerard stories where one of them is dead and the other isn't accepting it that I knew what was going on from the beginning, but I think that's a problem with the fandom, not the story. And this is a lot better than the others.

[ex_sabotage]

hahaha I have no clue why but I love killing my characters off. And I try to make my stories different, but everything seems to have already been done, especially when it comes to Frank and Gerard. But I totally get where you're coming from. And I totally agree with the mantra of MOAR RAY XD

And thank you very much.