I really enjoyed the friendships and growing romance in this, and I like the X-Men-esque school you've built. Frank's POV was fun to read, and I want to know more about his relationship with his mom and his future protecting his fellow mutants. I think that would actually be my main criticism of the story: I want to know more. Especially about the increasing threat to the mutants.
Thank you so much! And so do I, I'd love to write a sequel where the boys are maybe a little bit older and can play a bigger part as fighters/leaders etc.
Adored. From start to finish. The way everything builds at a steady enough pace to keep you interested is brilliant. Following on from what Allyndra said, I'd have like some background on Frank and his mom...any chance of a sequel delving a little into that sometime?
And I love how Frank was totally into Alicia at one point and even though it went nowhere they're obviously really close and get along great. <3
This was awesome! I did feel like you could have maybe done more with the HSA, because there seemed to be plot there, but I did like how they really are just kids, and it's not their job to deal with that shit, not really, not yet. Also, yeah for a sweet naturally progressing not angsty build up between Frank and Gerard! Mutual crushes, building up to kissing, and they're together no drama! YAY!
That was exactly what I thought when I was planning the fic out. I wanted them to be the kids and not some glossed over superheroes. No-drama relationships are the best! ♥
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And I love how Frank was totally into Alicia at one point and even though it went nowhere they're obviously really close and get along great.
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Thank you so much!
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THIS IS AMAAAAAZING !!!
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