TEAM FINE: early bird, "The Birds Are The Bees"

Aug 09, 2013 17:24

Title: The Birds Are The Bees
Author: mizufae
Team: Fine
Prompt: early bird
Pairing(s): McKay/Sheppard
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Brief dub-con
Word count: ~2.5K
Summary: Really though, sex pollen is as good an explanation as any.

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hanorganaas August 9 2013, 17:12:09 UTC
It was very hot I loved it!

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antares04a August 9 2013, 19:54:34 UTC
Oh, yes! This was really lovely and hot! And I love the "early birds" who are the reason for this cuddling. *g*

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mific August 9 2013, 22:21:17 UTC
That was hot and hilarious! Rodney was deliciouly snarky and I really liked how it was happiness pollen and smooching made them happiest. Plus that there was a bit of tension after, but readily overcome by teasing. But oh god, Ronon. That breaks my heart. I know it could be read the 'always happy' way, but no. Might have been different if there were Wraith there to kill, I guess. Well done.

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fanficfan123 August 9 2013, 22:48:44 UTC
A lot of fun--the reveal that it was not sex pollen was an unexpected delight. The way the guys incorporate their snark into this development, tacitly agreeing that affectionate sex is what makes them happy, continues the joy. And some other happy-making instances--show tunes, food, satisfying scientific curiosity--were a diverting hoot. Is Ronon, though, already happy because he has survived Running and now has his Atlantis family and mission against the Wraith . . . ? Or is he just being close-mouthed? Deft wording: I particularly liked John's "cock . . . seemingly innocent. Rodney knows better."

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