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TEAM FINE: weather the storm, "The Storm Before the Calm"

Aug 14, 2013 20:17

Title: The Storm Before the Calm
Author: goddess47
Team: Fine
Prompt: weather the storm
Pairing(s): McKay/Sheppard
Rating: R
Warnings: Character whump
Word count: 4750
Summary: "And we have had absolutely no luck with searching for vague energy sources," John felt obligated to point out. "Wait, we've had lots of luck, all bad."

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Comments 31

hanorganaas August 14 2013, 19:45:57 UTC

Aww the ending was adorable great fic!

goddess47 September 2 2013, 02:09:41 UTC

So very glad you liked it! Thanks!

fanficfan123 August 14 2013, 23:10:51 UTC

Effective details describing the storm's impact on the guys struggling to hold on to the cliff and each other.

goddess47 September 2 2013, 02:10:17 UTC

So glad that worked for you... John would always fight to hold on to Rodney!

Thanks!

fanficfan123 September 3 2013, 06:51:31 UTC

You're very welcome.

tavabean August 15 2013, 01:04:49 UTC

A real "cliff hanger"...Nice story, I could feel how wet and soaked they were during their ordeal. Glad Rodney could tell how John truly felt.

goddess47 September 2 2013, 02:10:57 UTC

Rodney really is bright... he just needs a clue to work with!

So glad you liked it!

popkin16 August 15 2013, 07:01:21 UTC

Wow, things got pretty tense there. I loved that John couldn't leave Rodney down there by himself; he had to climb down too, make sure Rodney was okay and stay with him until help arrived. The rainy planet sounds pretty unpleasant (wet and cold, ugh). It sucks that they didn't get to seek out the source of the energy signal, but completely understandable that they'd return to Atlantis to be checked out. The image of John and Rodney wandering Atlantis in scrubs is weirdly endearing :P I'm super glad they got their happy ending~

I enjoyed this fic very much!

goddess47 September 2 2013, 02:12:40 UTC

I suspect they've both wandered through Atlantis in scrubs a lot!

Yes, they got their happy ending -- so glad you liked it!

antares04a August 15 2013, 15:36:30 UTC

I can see why John would climb down to give Rodney the impression that he is not only in this! And of course he revealed how he was really feeling in this life-and-death moment! I'm glad there was a happy ending for them! Lovely story.

goddess47 September 2 2013, 02:13:17 UTC

John would never leave Rodney alone, if he could help it...

So glad you liked it!