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TEAM COOL: sign of the times, "The Second Phase"

Aug 19, 2013 17:39

Title: The Second Phase
Author: squidgiepdx
Team: Cool
Prompt: sign of the times
Pairing(s): McKay/Sheppard
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Word count: 2,106
Summary: Atlantis finally makes it back to Pegasus, and Sheppard notices some changes in the expedition once they settle back in.

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Comments 23

issaro August 21 2013, 23:32:36 UTC

Aw! Cute boys. Well done!

mandykaysfic August 22 2013, 01:41:09 UTC

Double congratulations to Jeannie for her pregnancy and her revelation. I love the real sense of finally being home.

springwoof August 22 2013, 02:21:49 UTC

Such a charming, sweet story! I liked the Expedition, back in Pegasus, back home, and everyone pairing off. And Our Boys back to playing with their race cars. ::grin::

I liked that John and Madison had Top Sekrets they shared between them. And it was lovely that both Jeannie and Teyla were pregnant with second children.

And of course Jeannie gave away your secret crush, Rodney--that's what little sisters are for...

inu_spockya August 22 2013, 07:52:05 UTC

oh, cute!! this one was funny -- love Corporal Delmar pinching Rodney's cheek, lololol... and the ending is sweet. nicely done!

patk August 22 2013, 20:35:31 UTC

I really like the atmosphere of "we're back to stay" that we get to see and feel through John's POV - even if he feels a little on the fringe watching all those people pair up - nice nod towards the final balcony-scene of the last ep 'Enemy at the Gate'.

And I wouldn't put it past Jeannie that her act of outing Rodney wasn't entirely accidental or due to her misunderstanding the situation she saw. Perhaps she simply seized the opportunity to push things in the "right direction", so to speak. ;-)