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TEAM FINE: nine lives, "Nine Hearts"

Aug 20, 2013 18:40

Title: Nine Hearts
Author: fluffyllama
Team: Fine
Prompt: nine lives
Pairing(s): McKay/Sheppard
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: AU (both characters have always been female)
Word count: 3071
Summary: In which McKay is a demanding boss and Sheppard gets fired a lot. Which is more of a surprise than you might think, considering she doesn't actually have a job.
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goddess47 August 21 2013, 01:31:28 UTC

I'm not always into gender-benders but this is funny and nicely done... I love McKay losing at paintball, dressed in all the wrong clothes...

Good job!

danceswithgary August 21 2013, 01:53:32 UTC

Sheppard's teasing was funny! :-D

fanficfan123 August 21 2013, 02:59:03 UTC

Even gender flipped, McKay has personal name problems. Sheppard's ego-bolstering of McKay's paint ball war performance here was a nice echo of the ways SGA John recognizes and encourages Rodney's efforts there.

hanorganaas August 21 2013, 03:28:56 UTC

Hehehehe giggled throughout this fic good job!

popkin16 August 21 2013, 04:50:26 UTC

Ooo, I was super excited when I saw that both John and Rodney are women in this. And I am not disappointed! i love the idea of Jane hanging around a place she doesn't really work, I love that Raquel uses video game hearts as a means of keeping track of her employees and the number of times she's fired them (to do that, she probably has to know their name, so she probably pretends not to remember). I love that Jane brought Raquel cookies and focused on her during paintball, and the ending is completely delightful. I bet Jane is going to earn those hearts ;) This fic is so fun, the characters spot on; definitely something I'm going to re-read in the future!