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Ficlet: Business

Apr 18, 2010 13:56

Business by sheafrotherdon
~400 words. The effect of John Sheppard upon one Rodney McKay. PG.

( He was just minding his own business . . . )

author:sheafrotherdon

Comments 75

esteefee April 18 2010, 19:19:34 UTC

ahahahhaha brilliant!

I see his hairs all END-STANDING and sideways with his pink cheeks all puzzle-frowned just before he takes off like a mad dash SPRINTER! right after Col. Crazy Ambush Business-Wrecker!

sheafrotherdon April 18 2010, 19:21:34 UTC

I like to think he has the exact expression on his face he wore in Echoes, when John said "you wanna go take a closer look?" And Rodney stood there, stock still for half a second, mouth open, and then ZOOOOOOOOOOM :D

simboo April 18 2010, 19:27:26 UTC

Heee! Very cute! :D

sheafrotherdon April 18 2010, 19:52:44 UTC

thank you!!

miscellanny April 18 2010, 19:28:36 UTC

Heee that was gorgeous!

sheafrotherdon April 18 2010, 19:53:12 UTC

thank you! ♥!

kassrachel April 18 2010, 19:28:51 UTC

eeeeee!

Oh, I love this a LOT. How do you pack so much adorable into 400 words?

sheafrotherdon April 18 2010, 19:53:24 UTC

I can take no credit - it's all Rodney's fault :D :D

outsideth3box April 18 2010, 19:30:56 UTC

Okay then, indeed. *chuckles*

Very much of the sweet and adorable sort, this is, yes.

sheafrotherdon April 18 2010, 19:53:33 UTC

thank you so much! :D