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asyouleft in mcsmooch

the last kiss

Apr 19, 2010 21:34

Title: The Last Kiss
Rating: PG
Word Count: 311
A/N: I accidentally stumbled across this in a notebook mixed in with notes on the history of linguistics and Seamus Heaney from 2008. And then the community opened up again so I thought, eh, perfect timing. Unbeated so all mistakes are belonging to me.

( the last kiss )

author:asyouleft

Comments 18

outsideth3box April 20 2010, 03:09:17 UTC

Wow, that's intense. I really, really hope he doesn't, either.

Well done!

asyouleft April 21 2010, 02:29:32 UTC

Thank you! :)

danceswithgary April 20 2010, 03:20:16 UTC

Very affecting story. Well done.

asyouleft April 21 2010, 02:29:51 UTC

Thank you! :)

annieb1955 April 20 2010, 03:26:23 UTC

Beautiful, love the intensity of his hope.

asyouleft April 21 2010, 02:30:06 UTC

Thank you! :)

theantipam April 20 2010, 04:38:54 UTC

Brought tears to my eyes! Facing mortality is universal, and yet so personal. And facing the mortality of a loved one can be the very worst.

asyouleft April 21 2010, 02:31:29 UTC

Awe! *hands you tissue* Was not going for tear inducing.

Sadly, I was losing someone very close to me around the time this was written, I don't remember if it was directly inspired by, but I'm sure it's what I was thinking!

Thank you. :)

telperion_15 April 20 2010, 07:20:37 UTC

*wibble* I hope he doesn't either...

asyouleft April 21 2010, 02:33:37 UTC

Me either!!