Comments | mcsmooch: In the Beginning

outsideth3box in mcsmooch

Apr 20, 2010 14:46

Title: In the Beginning
Author: outsideth3box
Rating: PG
Spoilers: None
Wordcount: 317
A/N: A bit of an experiment.

( In the Beginning )

Comments 16

melagan April 20 2010, 20:26:29 UTC

Mmmmmmmm. This m'dear, is a very sensual anatomy of a kiss. ♥

outsideth3box April 20 2010, 20:47:25 UTC

Oh, I'm so glad to hear you say that, it's exactly what I was going for.

Thank you!

telperion_15 April 20 2010, 20:32:54 UTC

Oh, very nice... :)

outsideth3box April 20 2010, 20:48:26 UTC

Thank you! I'm very glad you liked it. :)

mezzo_cammin April 20 2010, 22:14:33 UTC

You should experiment more often. This was a delight of sensuality. :o)

outsideth3box April 20 2010, 22:34:54 UTC

What a lovely compliment! Thank you!

danceswithgary April 20 2010, 22:15:46 UTC

Lovely!

outsideth3box April 20 2010, 22:35:52 UTC

Thanks so much!

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outsideth3box April 20 2010, 23:03:26 UTC

Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it. :D