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Fic: 1000 Cranes

Dec 31, 2010 19:41

author:melagan
title:1000 Cranes
word count:464
rating: PG
beta:mischief5
mistakes=mine

( 1000 Cranes )

author:melagan

Comments 36

danceswithgary January 1 2011, 21:36:14 UTC

So sweet!

melagan January 2 2011, 01:37:16 UTC

Thank you!

goddess47 January 2 2011, 00:14:15 UTC

John knows when to push Rodney's boundaries... and they both win!

Thumb kissing! FTW!

melagan January 2 2011, 01:38:13 UTC

I'm a fan of thumb kissing especially as a prelude to Everything kissing :)

altyronsmaker January 2 2011, 20:21:17 UTC

Rodney didn’t move. Hell, John was starting to wonder if he was even breathing, he sat so still. Then Rodney’s eyelashes fluttered shut and he closed his mouth over John’s thumb, kissing the tip. John softly moaned.

That line, paragraph, what ever!, is SEXY AS HELL. OMG. I got chills.

This was really sweet and hot at the same time. *high fives*

melagan January 2 2011, 20:47:33 UTC

*fistpump of joy*

Thank youuuuuuuu

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melagan January 4 2011, 12:36:47 UTC

Thank you muchly m'dear :)

fanficfan123 January 4 2011, 00:43:39 UTC

Sweet.

melagan January 4 2011, 12:37:16 UTC

Thank you!