Cat's Birthday HP Drabblethon III

Apr 16, 2006 00:00

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Between two wars: a potion, a promise, and Aunt Petunia senji April 16 2006, 18:28:19 UTC
Recipient: waterbird
Prompt: Between two wars: a potion, a promise, and Aunt Petunia
Word Count: 100
Rating: G

Vernon was working late at the office, and Petunia was beginning to worry.

Dusting the mantlepiece she heard a knocking at the door. There's a perfectly good bell. Outside was a greasy, robed, and faintly familiar gentleman. Shortly he was explaining his business over a cup of tea.

"You're worrying, Petunia. That he might leave, perhaps?"

She nodded, wondering how this familiar stranger knew.

"An efficacious Love Potion... in exchange for a simple promise..."

Another nod.

"...whenever anything unusual happens around Harry you'll tell me."

"Whatever... yes... I promise."

And he was gone, only a signed vial betraying his visit.

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Re: Between two wars: a potion, a promise, and Aunt Petunia mayhap April 16 2006, 18:35:36 UTC
Oooooooooooooooh. Very nice.

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Re: Between two wars: a potion, a promise, and Aunt Petunia gileonnen April 16 2006, 18:41:16 UTC
How deeply creepy--I do hope it's done with the best of intentions!

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Re: Between two wars: a potion, a promise, and Aunt Petunia heidi8 April 16 2006, 19:34:19 UTC
That is completely amazing and excellent! Wow.

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Re: Between two wars: a potion, a promise, and Aunt Petunia helzebel April 16 2006, 21:19:00 UTC
Very very good! I was actually discussing Petunia's knowledge of the wizarding world with someone earlier... This idea didn't come up, but it's interesting and plausible... The drabble format works really well here, keeps it very clean and simple and minimalist. :)

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Re: Between two wars: a potion, a promise, and Aunt Petunia senji April 16 2006, 23:26:56 UTC
It's a lot better now I've got it down to 100 words - I was kind of pleased with it at twice that length, but…

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Re: Between two wars: a potion, a promise, and Aunt Petunia waterbird April 16 2006, 21:57:59 UTC
Ooooh, very nice. I love that Petunia is willing to use magic when it's to her advantage. This one opens up a whole realm of possibilities about why she remains so bitter! Thank you!

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Re: Between two wars: a potion, a promise, and Aunt Petunia senji April 16 2006, 23:30:41 UTC
I'm glad you liked it. :-)

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Re: Between two wars: a potion, a promise, and Aunt Petunia hibernater April 16 2006, 23:30:26 UTC
Clever, and the atmosphere is chilled and sharp. Beautiful use of adjectives.

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