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Cat's Birthday HP Drabblethon IV

Apr 22, 2007 00:00

Sorted: 149 prompts! Blame the Cat(s).

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For Cheshyre coffee_n_cocoa April 22 2007, 01:27:26 UTC

Recipient: cheshyre
Prompt: Narcissa + Neville *NOT* noncon
Word Count: 100
Rating: PG-13, maybe

She watched her lover while he slept. He was the same age as her son, but with kindness she’d never known with her husband; and the maturity she despaired of ever seeing in her only child.

Subterfuge wasn’t his greatest strength; she’d known precisely why he’d come to her in the beginning. That presumption might have cost him dearly, once. Not now, after so many days listening to her fears followed by nights crying out in his arms as he ensured her pleasure before taking his own.

Tomorrow, Narcissa would tell Neville where to find the Lestranges. All of them.

Re: For Cheshyre coffee_n_cocoa April 23 2007, 01:54:05 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it! :D

Re: For Cheshyre waterbird April 22 2007, 20:08:48 UTC

I love the idea that Neville's affection could make Narcissa willing to betray her own family. Brilliantly done.

Re: For Cheshyre coffee_n_cocoa April 23 2007, 01:56:46 UTC

It's amazing what a little love and tenderness can accomplish, isn't it? I'm glad you liked it! :))

Re: For Cheshyre nangijala April 23 2007, 00:11:38 UTC

Beautiful, just beautiful. ♥

Re: For Cheshyre coffee_n_cocoa April 23 2007, 01:58:41 UTC

Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed it! :)

Re: For Cheshyre marginaliana April 23 2007, 02:21:47 UTC

Yes yes yes! This is how Neville will end the war, with kindness... ♥!

Re: For Cheshyre coffee_n_cocoa April 23 2007, 02:59:44 UTC

Neville Longbottom: the power the Dark Lord knows not. Wouldn't that be fantastic?

Damn, that would've made a great prompt!

Re: For Cheshyre fiona_fawkes April 23 2007, 02:26:08 UTC

OOH!!! Oh my. Oh honey, you made me sit gasp. That's awesome.

Re: For Cheshyre coffee_n_cocoa April 23 2007, 03:05:25 UTC

:D Thanks sweetie! I'm glad you liked it so much!

Re: For Cheshyre elsajeni April 23 2007, 04:04:21 UTC

This is cold and brilliant. I've always assumed that Neville will be tracking down the Lestranges, and now I'll always imagine him using this method.

Re: For Cheshyre coffee_n_cocoa April 23 2007, 13:20:02 UTC

I honestly can't imagine anyone but Neville facing down Bellatrix in the last book, so I'm very happy you enjoyed this! Thank you!

Re: For Cheshyre dizilla April 23 2007, 05:58:56 UTC

Oh wow. This is lovely and sad. Yay for Narcissa though. ^__^

Re: For Cheshyre coffee_n_cocoa April 23 2007, 13:21:29 UTC

Thank you! I figured it would nice for Narcissa to find some happiness before betraying her sister to her lover... ;)

Re: For Cheshyre eeyore9990 April 23 2007, 14:02:26 UTC

Dude! I saw that you were writing this prompt and went, "OMG, she's gonna make it awesome!" And guess what? You did!! I love being right! :D

If you DO develop it further, beat me over the head with it, okay? My flist reading seems to be getting shorter and shorter lately.

Re: For Cheshyre coffee_n_cocoa April 23 2007, 18:28:31 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad you liked it hon!

And if I do develop it further, I'll definitely let you know!

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