Cat's Birthday HP Drabblethon 5

[mctabby]

Sorted: 123 prompts! Blame the Cat(s).

Comments

[jtav]

Recipient: (the person you're writing for) coffee_n_cocoaPrompt: (as given to you in this post) The moment Ginny realized she should have chosen Neville over Harry

[lordhellebore]

Ohhhh, I like this. I've always had a thing for Neville, and I can see him trying.

[coffee_n_cocoa]

Yes, yes, yes! I always believed Neville would take a moment to offer what comfort he could to Ginny while Harry was off having his sandwich and nap. Perfect, thank you!

[madderbrad]

What a great little drabble!! With a whole lot of sense buried within, too.

[shouldknobetter]

Neville is perfectly written here.

[eeyore9990]

*glee* Is it wrong that I'm totally pulling for Neville to unknowingly steal Ginny away from Harry? If so, I don't want to be right!

[gmth]

Aww, that's lovely and sweet.

[tania_sings]

It always bothered me that Harry didn't stop to comfort Ginny after her brother died. Even a few words would have meant a lot. This is really sweet.

[celandineb]

Awww. Well done Neville!

[la_dissonance]

Awww, how sweet. Neville is love for going up to her and trying, even if he doesn't seem to think so. Yes, Ginny, you're much better off with him. :D

[bonfoi]

YES! *fist pumping* That's the way!

[kellychambliss]

I really like this! Love the meta and lines like The words pound through her like a heartbeat and just the whole premise/characterizations.

[medawyn]

I love how open ended the final line is... very sweet.

[leela_cat]

Nicely done. I like the contrasts here, between celebration and mourning, between Neville and Ginny, between the possibilities of what could happen.

[moreteadk]

Yes, she's exactly right. He should have spent the time with Ginny and not with the other two. I hope she realises that it's not too late to choose something else.

[kizzy7]

Sweet! I do love Neville, and this works perfectly!