Cat's Birthday HP Drabblethon 5

Jul 26, 2009 00:00

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ladyofthelog July 26 2009, 02:49:10 UTC
Recipient: bethbethbeth
Prompt: Severus Snape: "Your joy is your sorrow unmasked." (Kahlil Gibran)
Word count: 104
Rating: G

Severus Snape has worn a lot of masks in his life. One of them is in his hands now. He looks at it, the silver face, the incised spirals and whorls, the receding eyes.

He sets it down to examine his face in the mirror. It has gained new lines over the past year, which do him no favors. Yet to see himself through his own eyes, without the burden of seeing himself through others', gives him a moment of peace.

He picks up the mask again.

There is no joy in his world. He will not leave it as he came in: naked, squalling, alive.

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bethbethbeth July 26 2009, 02:55:38 UTC
Oh, my poor, poor Severus...and what a perfect final line. Thank you so much!

(Weirdly enough, I just came home from seeing HBP for the second time this minute, only to find that you had just posted your response to my prompt. The synchronicity of the universe is a wonderful thing)

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ladyofthelog July 26 2009, 03:02:22 UTC
Most welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed, and happy to be a part of a moment of such serendipity. ;)

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celandineb July 26 2009, 03:02:31 UTC
*sigh* Oh, Severus.

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la_dissonance July 26 2009, 04:03:41 UTC
Ooo, this is really awesome. So chilling.

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nextian July 26 2009, 04:09:38 UTC
Oh, my god, that last line is a killer. A+.

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bonfoi July 26 2009, 05:32:07 UTC
Powerful, very powerful image you created there.

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kizzy7 July 26 2009, 14:34:48 UTC
*sniffles*

It was tragically sad, and yet beautiful too.

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jtav July 26 2009, 15:50:07 UTC
Killer last line.

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kellychambliss July 26 2009, 16:00:09 UTC
Perfect use of the prompt; well done!

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leela_cat July 26 2009, 17:38:49 UTC
Oh, that final line is absolutely wonderful. So lovely and so sad.

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ariadneelda July 27 2009, 11:42:20 UTC
Oh, poor, poor Snape. This is heartbreaking. Great drabble and a perfect last line!

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medawyn July 27 2009, 21:58:30 UTC
Poignant and very lovely.

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lore July 27 2009, 23:11:11 UTC
Ouch! Painfully well done. Thank you!

love, lore

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