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Cat's Birthday HP Drabblethon 5

Jul 26, 2009 00:00

Sorted: 123 prompts! Blame the Cat(s).

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Surprise! moreteadk July 26 2009, 11:20:33 UTC

Recipient: kalina_blue
Prompt: Dramione - Post-DH, EWE - Harry finds out Draco and Hermione are secretly dating.
Word count: 430. Idea was too large to fit in only 100 words.
Rating: All ages.

"Harry!"

She looked surprised to see him there on her doorstep. And why was she wearing a bathrobe at this time of day? She looked like she had just rolled out of bed.

"Happy birthday, Hermione," he said, holding out a wrapped present with a big bow on it. Something was definitely wrong here. Harry always came to visit her on her birthday and he always came at half past three in the afternoon. Then they would have tea and a piece of cake, talk about the accomplishment of their various children and agree that they should try to see each other more often. Without Ron, they just never seemed to get around to it ( ... )

Re: Surprise! faris_eirin July 26 2009, 11:28:33 UTC

I like it, well done :)

Re: Surprise! moreteadk July 26 2009, 13:05:43 UTC

Thanks. :)

Re: Surprise! marginaliana July 26 2009, 13:22:49 UTC

his heart very much set on making a fuss

Ha! This is very Harry!

Re: Surprise! moreteadk July 26 2009, 13:25:10 UTC

Thanks. :)

(that's a cute icon! Awww!)

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Re: Surprise! moreteadk July 26 2009, 14:02:35 UTC

Awww *pets* You're sweet. I like you. :) Sorry I haven't done it for a while.

Re: Surprise! bambu345 July 26 2009, 14:55:05 UTC

This was excellent.

Re: Surprise! moreteadk July 26 2009, 14:55:40 UTC

Thank you. :)

Re: Surprise! bonfoi July 26 2009, 19:32:55 UTC

Harry is so hotheaded! Time should have softened the edges of some hurts.

Re: Surprise! moreteadk July 26 2009, 19:33:47 UTC

yes, Hermione thinks so too. But it could have been worse. :)

Re: Surprise! celandineb July 26 2009, 21:44:39 UTC

Widows need love too!

Re: Surprise! moreteadk July 28 2009, 04:07:48 UTC

Indeed. :D

Re: Surprise! snegurochka_lee July 27 2009, 14:46:16 UTC

Loved it! Especially how Draco still calls her "Granger." :) And the last line is great. :)

Re: Surprise! moreteadk July 28 2009, 04:09:40 UTC

I don't think he can help himself. :p And I don't imagine that's actually been her name for some twenty years at this point. :p It's probably to weird to say 'Hermione' and calling her 'Weasley' would just be a turn-off of dimensions...

Re: Surprise! lore July 29 2009, 23:35:28 UTC

Awww, Harry's thoughts, especially about Ron, are spot-on to me. Thank you so much!

love, lore

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