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Cat's Birthday HP Drabblethon 5

Jul 26, 2009 00:00

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gehayi July 26 2009, 17:08:38 UTC

Recipient: luminousmarble
Prompt: book and movie Hermione, in the same place at the same time
Word count: 605
Rating: G

"Excuse me..."

Hermione turned away from the stairs in Bathilda's house to see a very pretty young girl of thirteen or fourteen. She had light brown curly hair--the sort that Hermione herself had always wished she possessed, instead of her own uncontrollable bushy locks--and, despite the fact that she was grasping a wand in one hand, she was dressed in Muggle fashion--jeans, which were practical for mid-winter, and a thin pink hooded jacket, which could have done with less pink and more padding, in Hermione's opinion.

She was also holding a Time-Turner.

"Who are you?" Hermione whispered. "Where did you get that? There aren't supposed to be any left!"

The girl looked dreadfully confused. "I don't think that's the real problem here," she said carefully. "Who are you?"

It didn't even occur to Hermione to lie. "Hermione Granger!"

The girl frowned. "Something's very wrong here. I'm Hermione Granger ( ... )

erastes July 26 2009, 17:24:26 UTC

Ha ha ha! Brilliant! Yes - STUPID girl!!! and perfectly in canon!

gehayi July 26 2009, 18:07:10 UTC

Thank you! Yes, Hermione really should have noticed that on her own. (Although I suppose that in this case, she sort of did.)

tunxeh July 26 2009, 17:35:50 UTC

This is brilliant. As are the two Hermiones, with the differences in their personalities clearly coming through.

gehayi July 26 2009, 18:08:02 UTC

Thank you! I'm very pleased that they both show up as distinctly different people.

gmth July 26 2009, 17:59:16 UTC

Oh wow, great job!

gehayi July 26 2009, 18:09:04 UTC

Thank you! I'm very glad you liked it!

shouldknobetter July 26 2009, 18:22:46 UTC

Very well done!

bonfoi July 26 2009, 20:38:46 UTC

Interesting.

celandineb July 26 2009, 21:52:12 UTC

Oh, well done!

caboca July 26 2009, 22:22:38 UTC

Clever! I'm glad you didn't demonise film!Hermione, but you did emphasise their differences. A great read, thank you for it.

luminousmarble July 26 2009, 23:00:44 UTC

Hee! Thank you very much for six drabbles in one. I especially like that, despite their differences, they're still know-it-alls...

:D

jtav July 26 2009, 23:53:27 UTC

Brilliant. I love how film!Hermione is allowed to have good qualities.

snegurochka_lee July 27 2009, 01:09:05 UTC

Aha, how creative! I enjoyed that!

lilacsigil July 27 2009, 04:02:16 UTC

Oh, brilliant! I love the similarities between them just as much as the differences, and the way that they take information from each other and build on it.

lore July 27 2009, 09:34:10 UTC

Whoo hoo! Canon and all its fun inconsistencies! I think you did a nice job with a difficult (but way cool) prompt. *HUGS*

love, lore

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